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Another day in the Hood

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Another day in the Hood

Postby CasperJ » Oct 10th, '14, 22:55

trshady, home niggas
uncle toms, need no triggers
sittin on, six figures
tricks I tried, now disfigured
fixin up several stitches
cutting up seven bitches
running home, lightbulb gone
must've been those cali niggas
blast blast, nuttin nigga gasps
blast blast, steppin niggas gas
dark fiend
yet light like im Jackson
dark seed
yet grow like im Paxton
Fuckin up these impersonators like im terminator
musta called exterminators cause im bustin-able
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Re: Another day in the Hood

Postby Just Silver » Oct 10th, '14, 23:03

Pretty bad considering your feedback to me

The flow is too short and some lines like the lightbulb one don't make much sense or it's an extreme stretch in

Try writing a lengthier piece and work on your wordplay
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Re: Another day in the Hood

Postby CasperJ » Oct 10th, '14, 23:04

Just Silver wrote:Pretty bad considering your feedback to me

The flow is too short and some lines like the lightbulb one don't make much sense or it's an extreme stretch in

Try writing a lengthier piece and work on your wordplay

nigga, I challenge your punk ass to a motherfuckin battle (in a nice way)
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Re: Another day in the Hood

Postby CanadaPure » Oct 11th, '14, 00:13

Needs LOF
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