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another hiatus

Postby Just Silver » Nov 9th, '14, 23:38

Straight waiting for my time in these shadows and pits
Ill be wasting all my rhymes for these f*ggots and bi*ches
Used to be on a forum where writing was treasured
Now it's like im the only white guy that can write with these embers
And it's hard to remember, why I got banned in the first place
The instagram wasn't private anyone could've searched her face
So fu*k Charlotte with a charcoal cock, and get her bloody on the dock
Till the head pops off, and the Molotov drops
Flames in a sluts vicinity, you'll know the motherfu*kers name, can't finish me
Foreign fu*ks from east bum fu*k, im from the east you'll get beat with nunchucks
The type of sh*t that'll make a nun a slut
A couple kombat uppercuts leave em toasty scene is ghostly
Bandanna over orifices , so you won't know who it is



They say I need to quit,go seek some help
Before I see myself dead and end up in Hell
I've said it myself, I know I have a problem
But these drugs momentarily make it so I don't got one
Living in a situation Where my life is at stake
And every single day I just space out and I pace
Trying to help out friends, the nice guy finished last
That's me jogging behind with half of my glass
And I'm chuggin cause this life is nothin
But drug consumption, non confronting guess I'm frontin
Should of became something, but supported this bullsh*t now I'm buggin
In the shadows feeling like less of a man
Staring at the wall with these meds in my hand
And my sweat glands are overactive I'm not over acting
I'm just over passion, and anything I believed in
I see this worlds truth as my depression deepens
Shouldn't have helped anybody but myself
It's like I'll get into a fight if I wanna move somewhere else
To the point I think my so called friend would stab me
I'm scared for my life and I can't believe sh*ts happening


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Re: another hiatus

Postby shadyblogger » Nov 9th, '14, 23:49

Lol dope writing brah
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Re: another hiatus

Postby SarkingMajor » Nov 10th, '14, 19:48

That's actually pretty sick
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I'd work on your delivery a little though. Your flow was amazing in some parts man :y:

You could be the new Luna C in a few years


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Re: another hiatus

Postby Just Silver » Nov 10th, '14, 19:49

Thanks for feed
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Re: another hiatus

Postby Just Silver » Nov 12th, '14, 20:43

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Re: another hiatus

Postby Charlotte » Nov 16th, '14, 00:35

you're actually sick in your head lol
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Re: another hiatus

Postby Just Silver » Nov 16th, '14, 00:40

Thanks for reading lol
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