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Postby mrplow » Aug 10th, '06, 18:00

You Asked

If I said I love you, would you say it to?
If I said you were my only, would you know its tru?
If I kiss you, would u kiss me?
If I would die, would you miss me?
If I was crying would you ask whats wrong?
If I was blue, would you sing me a song?
If I needed a friend, would you be there?
If I rote you a letter, would you care?
Answer these questions, I jus need to no
If you have love for me, befor I go

(*I say*)
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Postby stevethetruth » Aug 11th, '06, 02:26

not bad i liked it ;) ;) ;) :worship: :worship: :worship:



but it sounds like a modifyed version of 21 question...no offense


but other than that :thumbsup:
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Postby Coccoa » Aug 11th, '06, 03:55

Not good, not good, not enuff bitches on it.
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Postby Restlesswon » Aug 13th, '06, 14:22

pretty good,yeh it is like 21 questions


that name again is Mr.Plow :smoking:
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