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My Love 4 You

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My Love 4 You

Postby Rae » Aug 15th, '06, 00:55

Carl ... You make my life complete,
In ways I thought I could never dream,
You're everything I want in a guy,
Especially becuz you've gotten deep in my mind,
I know you've been through stuff I will never understand,
But I still am gonna stand beside my man,
I know you dont't like Em no more,
But I still love you to the core,
Thanx for bearing through all my shit,
And I'm sure by now you know I'm a bitch,
But somehow you find a way to love my anyways,
I still hope we'll be together always,
Well baby, I guess what I'm trying to say is I love you in every single way!

this was suppost to be for my boyfriend but i am not sure if i want to give it to him yet. b/c i am not sure if it is good or not. if u could give me sum suggestions and feed back that would be great. :) thanx
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Postby Rae » Aug 15th, '06, 01:10

OH YEAH ... I AM A GURL ... (JUST SO YA'LL KNOW ... LOL) sum1 just pmed me askin if i was a dude b/c of my username ... 100% GURL!!! lol
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Postby stevethetruth » Aug 15th, '06, 01:23

hey that's pretty good

i liked it
:worship:

it had some good rhymes in it
i look to hear more from you :happy:
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Postby Rae » Aug 15th, '06, 01:27

thanx same with u ... i read sum of urs 2 ... there great
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Postby stevethetruth » Aug 15th, '06, 01:36

thanks lol
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Postby Restlesswon » Aug 15th, '06, 02:18

hey thats pretty good
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Postby Rae » Aug 15th, '06, 02:35

thanx
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Re: My Love 4 You

Postby Evil_Deedz666 » Aug 15th, '06, 02:40

MarshellBM wrote:And I'm sure by now you know I'm a bitch,
Hehehe Sorri, but i liked that line.....
You got sumthin kid ;)
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Postby Rae » Aug 15th, '06, 02:50

lol thanx
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Postby polluted » Aug 15th, '06, 03:54

Carl.
lol....wut a funny name :D
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Postby soperman005 » Aug 15th, '06, 04:01

ya it was simple but i really liked it..
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