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ThomasAguanis vs DragonzEdge PT 2

Postby DragonzEdge » Aug 16th, '05, 09:43

I'll wait till you accept 8)
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Postby ThomasAguanis » Aug 16th, '05, 15:55

I accept.
B.K.A. The King of Kale A.K.A. The Superfood Sensai
I still rap better than you.

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Postby DragonzEdge » Aug 17th, '05, 03:03

yo, listen, i may have been shot down
but i bounce right back
i cant be phased im launching my second attack
if my first blow didnt amount to shit
bitch im back again so kiss my grits
im a soldier, i been through thick and thin
but seein you downs whats gonna make me grin
lyrikal assassin prepared to strike
strike you again and they say lightning aint strike
at the same spot twice man they wrong
imma ram you harder than tommy did pam
with his biggass shlong
if u think imma lose again,
just know that you dead wrong
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Postby ThomasAguanis » Aug 17th, '05, 05:02

Lightning can't strike me cause i'm covered in rubber
the same one i used on your mother
and i've got more bad news
you came back for round 2 but your gonna lose
i've seen better rhymes on blue's clues
i'll hit you so hard with punch lines you'll lose your shoes
if you were ever on stage all you'd get would be boo's
no matter how long your rap is or how many lines
the crowd wouldn't feel your rhymes
the ticket's wouldn't sell for dimes
you're right you're first attack sucked dick
they didn't even leave a nick
or scratch,break,fracture,or dent on me
but my rhymes will burn you worse than 3rd degree



how long will this battle go this time?
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Postby 4D » Aug 17th, '05, 08:39

Thomas that was Hot man, you`re gonna walk this!!
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Postby DragonzEdge » Aug 17th, '05, 17:31

you gonna feel the pain of rightful indignation
shit will burn you hotter than flames of pernition
just try to hit me, imma be ready
imma stand my ground, legs gon be steady
you say you fucked my mom,
why would you fuck with ticking bomb?
blow the fuck up right up on ya
shell beat your ass with anything around ya
better question,
how you mount on when you half the size of a hobbit
ill rip your dick off like lorena bobbet
i mighta not fractured you last time
i got anti tank missiles this time
so grab some armor grab some ammo too
this time mothafucka imma pierce right through

3 rounds?
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Postby ThomasAguanis » Aug 17th, '05, 22:45

No tank missle or anything you got can damage me
you inflict no pain like a scrape on my knee
when i come through your not gonna be steady
you'll sure be shaking and you better be ready
to be beheaded by my machete
i'll tear through you like a knife through butter
when you're cut up i'll throw you in the gutter
and about you're mom, i fucked her but not with my dick
i rubbed my condomed big toe on her clit
but that's something i'll never do again in my life
her shit was nasty and green like a rotted honeydew slice covered in pubic lice.
her pussy mixed with her b.o. smelled like sauerkraut
the lorena bobbit line was nothing to be proud about
i swear i heard that shit on wild'n out.
and now i'm finshed with verse 2 of round 2
i still got one more to destroy you,worse than i already do.


and 3 rounds is fine by me. that means the next one is the last one.
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Postby eminemcaparica » Aug 17th, '05, 23:00

iau man, i would like to be english our american to can battle you both, and win of course. good luck.

dragon edge, put some pic
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Postby DragonzEdge » Aug 18th, '05, 05:09

Im a crazy chink that doesnt think
acts on impulse and snaps in a brink
dice your ass up in a blink
what the fuck more do you need to make your penis shrink
ill tear your ass up and stuff you in the kitchen sink
young and dangerous with one biggass army
try as you might but bitch you cant harm me
and what the fuck is wild n out
sounds like gay porn, but you must know
all about that shit i aint into
punk like you prolly dont know what lengths i go through
to write all the rhymes i wrote
shut your ass up fore i rip your throat out worse than
that bitch i choked


meh.......its late here and Im caffeine deprived...oh well i admit that this one sucks, to sleep i go weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee ](*,)
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Postby ThomasAguanis » Aug 18th, '05, 18:03

so this is the last round of this battle i better go all out
your last rhyme sucked what the hell was it about?
you may be caffeine deprived but that's no reason to suck.
you should have waited untill today to post your shit up.
i shouldn't even take time to respond. hope you don't mind.
on second thought i'll shit on you one last time
you think you can beat me,huh?
well you got a better chance of getting diphtheria.
you think your crazy? well i'm crazy as well.
i hope you get sickle cell,then die of cancer and go to hell.
or on other hand i'd rather kill you with a weed whacker.
then let my dog eat you like a saltine cracker.
and you didn't choke a bitch you choked yorself.
give me the title already so i can put it on my bookshelf.


well that's our last verses. i wasn't feeling my last one i guess i wasn't motivated enough that time.

and are you gonna put a poll in like last time or what?
and my idea is that you change the topic title to
ThomasAguanis vs. DragonzEdge Round 2 or something like that.
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Postby DragonzEdge » Aug 19th, '05, 02:51

last verse was gay, shit i admit it
imma bring all my shit out and imma spit it
you say imma lose and shit you might be right
but that doesnt mean that i aint puttin up a fight
win or lose, shit don't matter
all that matters is that i can gather
up all the shit i have to dish out
my words gon come out whether i scream or shout
the pain of losing is just a state of mind
there are other pains that are worst than this kind
if what i say is got you mad
imma turn around and have you kiss my asian ass
so pull a knife, pull a gun do what youll do
imma die an honorable death, so close the coffin
im man enough to say that this shit is through.

i realized my chances of winning this are slim. but this shit is great practice for me so meh, die or die trying.
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Postby ThomasAguanis » Aug 19th, '05, 04:26

This is great practice for me to.
i've gotten better everytime i battled you.
and you did the same i can tell.
if you ever want to battle again just ring the bell.
i admit we both fell short in some of raps.
but we did get better i'll tell you that.
even though we both kill each other and sin.
i hope you don't take any of the shit i say seriously i'm just trying to win.
and nothing you said ever got me mad i was just acting.
trying to be better than you with my rapping.
i have respect for you and like your style.
even if i say it is whack some shine's brighter than tile.
and it dosn't matter how this ends.
as long as we both come out as friends.
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Postby DragonzEdge » Aug 19th, '05, 06:16

shit dont matta cuz we both win
its not like bullets will pierce our skins
what would it be if we aint havin fun
we all rise up like the morning sun
we all have our own style tastes and design
but in the end both of us will shine
battling you made me strong
got you stronger, shit aint wrong
Its no mistake i wanna make it big in rap
asian rappers are rare, i aint takin that crap
i may not be able to freestyle right
imma come through the game like ghost in the night
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Postby 4D » Aug 21st, '05, 11:26

This battle is excellent, i can`t choose. Both of you have come very far. Dragonzedge, some Great lines:
how you mount on when you half the size of a hobbit
ill rip your dick off like lorena bobbet
i mighta not fractured you last time
i got anti tank missiles this time
so grab some armor grab some ammo too
this time mothafucka imma pierce right through

Thomas Great lines :
and about you're mom, i fucked her but not with my dick
i rubbed my condomed big toe on her clit
but that's something i'll never do again in my life
her shit was nasty and green like a rotted honeydew slice covered in pubic lice.

That rhyme made me laugh out loud!!

If i have to vote i vote for Thomas, cos he made me laugh, but it really is very hard. Both of you are very good now!

I like the way ye kept it friendly too. Props!
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Postby DragonzEdge » Aug 23rd, '05, 06:27

wow, tied...nice :D
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