The TRshady Forum became read-only in December 2014. The 10 year history will live on, in this archive.
Continue the discussion with the new home for the Eminem and Hip Hop discussion: HipHopShelter.com.

no title

Want to share a poem, story or a moving article? Share creative literature text here.

no title

Postby Rae » Aug 15th, '06, 16:07

this last year,
i dont know how to explain it,
maybe this can help,
have you ever felt all alone,
that nobodys there,
well thats how i feel on a regular basis,
even when im seeing all the smiling faces,
i felt like this ever since my brother moved away,
the thing is he had no say,
i'd like to think if he did he woulda stayed,
my lil' bro ... yeah ... thats my best friend,
becuz he's always there in the end,
when i have a problem in school,
or witha friend,
he's a really smart kid,
when i look at him from a distance he seems so lost,
and its sad becuz he has a lot of potentail,
yeah my lil bro that my hero.
screename on Zune Social - HispanicLUVER

Image

I drink more than you, I party harder than you do, And my car is faster than yours too! RAWWRR!

www.myspace.com/harleyquinn667 <--- add me
User avatar
Rae
Soldier
Soldier
 
Posts: 1987
Joined: Feb 9th, '06, 19:38
Location: SC
Gender: Female

Postby stevethetruth » Aug 15th, '06, 19:18

hmm not bad

keep it up!!! :D
http://www.myspace.com/stevethetruth <-- my myspace add me!!
User avatar
stevethetruth
Under The Influence
Under The Influence
 
Posts: 4112
Joined: May 27th, '06, 02:06
Location: wherever, whenever
Gender: Male


Return to Creative Writing



Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users