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.~*My Bestfriend*~.

Postby Rae » Aug 18th, '06, 15:46

i never said you had to fall in love with me,
i thought it would be just a fling,
i didnt know you cared for me,
i found out for the first time when i found your suicide letter,
you said you loved me,
i wish youy woulda told me sonner,
at the time i thought of you only as a friend,
but now we'll never know what it coulda been,
i wish you didnt do what you did,
i want you back,
you were my bestfriend,
ya never know,
we could have had sumthing,
tha chemistry could have been there,
doing what you did,
ya- good way of showing me you cared,
there hasnt been a day that you havent gone through my mind,
damn its sure been hell without you man,
like i said ... ,
you were my bestfriend!
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Aug 18th, '06, 15:48

excellent again :D really like thats got the makings of a real song you should try hit it with a couple of verses you know nice work :D
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Postby Rae » Aug 18th, '06, 15:53

aw thanx ... i apprecaite it! :D
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Postby .Giorgo. » Aug 18th, '06, 17:18

You're a big example to me.. really i like your songs. And ur nice to me :).
This song is really great, there's a story in it.

Your songs are going deep in my heart, you are really good.
I love u songs. :flower: .
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Postby Rae » Aug 18th, '06, 17:20

awwwwwwww

ur so sweet! :'( thanx ... i like ur stuff 2 ... i didnt think anybody like my stuff that much! but ... yeah thanx it means alot! ;) and im nice to everyone that is nice 2 me! (just treat me tha way u wanna b treated ... lol)
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Postby stevethetruth » Aug 18th, '06, 19:32

wicked good i like how everything you write is really deep and has a lot meaning to it

keep it up!!
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Postby Rae » Aug 18th, '06, 19:36

awww thank you ... :D
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Postby C-Game » Aug 25th, '06, 14:49

nice 1
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