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The Meaning Of Love

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The Meaning Of Love

Postby .Giorgo. » Aug 18th, '06, 18:38

I'm addicted, but now first i'm gonna do better on my English.
This is the last one.

The Meaning Of Love,

What is the meaning of love, a big question, i asked myself a lot
It's a deep thinking question, i think i know it, or it that just a taught ?
There a girl, i love her, i would take a bullet fer her, is this love ?
I feel deep feelins, trange feelings, i wanna kis her, i feel even a glove,

I wanna invite you at home, cuz my parents don't want it,
But fuck them, i love you, you are everything, bit and bit,
No one can stop me seeying you, i don't know why,
But i care about you, ik look always into your eye,
And than relize what i girl that i have, i hack so much luck,

I think i'm the luckiest boy on the earth, nothing can divorse us,
Whe have something nice, something with succes,
But why am is so shy to you, am i that much in love ?
Whe are everything togheter, a i need is you, i thank the man above,
Het put us togheter, i'm so glaid that i have you,
I never want to lose you, My love too you is very hughe,
.Giorgo.
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Aug 18th, '06, 18:45

nice man your getting better with everything you post keep it up :D
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Postby Rae » Aug 18th, '06, 19:09

that was good to ... i wouldnt worry about it when ppl say stuff about ur english ... b/c they gotta remember that english is really hard to learn. and its not like your english is that bad ... just a couple spelling errors here and there. ur doing really well. on the poem i could tell that u didnt miss spell as much ... so ur def. doing better! :D :D :D

keep it up!

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