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Keystyle :- Fear

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Aug 18th, '06, 22:50

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are you afraid , do you feel the fear ,
like a gun getting pointed from the rear ,
are you a warrior , never scared to fight ,
are you artist , writing till the middle of the night ,
are you a man......do you know what one is ?
do you think a man holds fear , or is a man golath with only david to fear ,
come on lets hear , is it ok to feel fear , is ok to be scared ,
coz i cannot tell , yeh i get scared and afraid , but that dont meen im pussy ,
ppl play it that way to make them feel hard ,
but they fear they wont get a birthday card ,
they fear they aint got real freinds ,
yeh see , homie , everyones got fear inside of them its just what you do with it thats count , you can shirmple up and be sacred yer life or turn around take it right,
you can lock it up inside hoping itll ride on by ,
or you can conquer it ,now thats a man ,
taking your biggest fear in the pam of your hand
and facing it head on , i mean come on ,
who has actually did this, coz untill you do, you aint a man and thats true,

im getting the hang of this keystyle i really like writing like this....lol...i say a word ( like this time i did fear) the word is usually a emotion then just write you should all try it anywae feedback please
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Postby .Giorgo. » Aug 18th, '06, 23:13

You stuff is always really Emotical. I mean,, it's cool to read it.
Cause i know feelings like that, also a gun on your head. Yeah i've had it.
So i know how it feels, you are scared then.

I'm gonna write somthing now, i'm really addicted to it :p.
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Aug 18th, '06, 23:16

.Giorgo. wrote:You stuff is always really Emotical. I mean,, it's cool to read it.
Cause i know feelings like that, also a gun on your head. Yeah i've had it.
So i know how it feels, you are scared then.

I'm gonna write somthing now, i'm really addicted to it :p.


ive never had a gun to my head lol im just saying afradi like how scary it be for a guy to have a gun behind you pointing at you ive never experienced it lol
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Postby stevethetruth » Aug 19th, '06, 01:52

nice dawg keep it up
man!! :D
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Postby Lil Pimp Tell 'Em » Aug 19th, '06, 02:07

damn you wrote all that in 8 minutes :confusion:

=D> nice job, i could never write somethin that good in 8 minutes :sweating:
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Aug 19th, '06, 02:46

Lil' PimP wrote:damn you wrote all that in 8 minutes :confusion:

=D> nice job, i could never write somethin that good in 8 minutes :sweating:


lol you get the hang of it

and thx steve :D
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