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Why Are We Different ?

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Why Are We Different ?

Postby .Giorgo. » Aug 19th, '06, 00:48

Why are Rappers different ? Not a rhyme or shit, just my feelings.

I'm a fucking rapper, i turn gold chains, big watches,
Am i different now ? i'm not the nice type,
But why i am get treaten otherwise now ?
At one day, i'm just gonna take my Glock and shoot everyone to death,
My life will never change, i have different songs,
Some song can make you cry, and other songs are a bad influence on you,
My life will be always the same, i write some shit.
But i will never adapt me to the rest of the people.
My music is my music, i'd will never betray my own life and music.
I aint a Snitch, you know ?.
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Aug 19th, '06, 00:51

u lose it a bit at the end in in the last 4 lines :sweating: rests good though
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Postby .Giorgo. » Aug 19th, '06, 00:56

Bar wrote:u lose it a bit at the end in in the last 4 lines :sweating: rests good though

I've editted it. you probable think now that i'm a kind of weird guy :'( :p
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Aug 19th, '06, 01:00

.Giorgo. wrote:
Bar wrote:u lose it a bit at the end in in the last 4 lines :sweating: rests good though

I've editted it. you probable think now that i'm a kind of weird guy :'( :p


nah lol and the edited ones better nice work :D
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