another quick rythm

by **,-,'-{Bar}-',-,** » Aug 21st, '06, 21:29

i dunno whats happening to me , you dont notice but a see ,
im rythming and rythming i dunno when to stop ,
im gonni get dun for speeding by the cop ,
pissed by how fast im spitting these raps out ,
only way to get betters practice aw-ight,
im gonni keep goin till ma shits tight ,
that my be by the end of the night ,
just pissing , gonni take a couple fo years ,
till a perfect and master ma flow ya hear ,
but untill then you can watch me get better, then go above you, till you worse than the shit on ma shoe , yeh you ,
waving my finger in the air , pointing at every mothefucker over there ,
now they hitten me with the stare , but then again....who care ?

just another something lol

by **Rae** » Aug 21st, '06, 21:39

wow that was good 2! nice rhymes in it 2 ...

by **,-,'-{Bar}-',-,** » Aug 21st, '06, 21:55

MarshellBM wrote:wow that was good 2! nice rhymes in it 2 ...

thanx

by **Rae** » Aug 22nd, '06, 15:07

Bar wrote:
MarshellBM wrote:wow that was good 2! nice rhymes in it 2 ...

thanx

no problem

by **,-,'-{Bar}-',-,** » Aug 25th, '06, 13:42

bump anyone else gonni give feed ?

another quick rythm

another quick rythm

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