unfinished rap for gf updated 9/5/06

by **soperman005** » Aug 21st, '06, 22:51

the first time i saw you
and u spoke it was like the volume
of ur voice increased and i listened
for the fisrt time and i invisioned
us livin together, then u left, missin
in that dream and then i felt imprisoned
I insist on reminiscin' on our history
Because without the past life is misery
the first day we kissed exists visually
in my head like ceremonies performed ritually
without ur presence, the very essence
of any hope i even have lessens,
when i'm with you, you set me free
thats why i never want you to leave
I love you Janine, way more than you see
I'll unconditionally love you, profusely
So I count the days we spend,
Cherishing and counting till' the end
You've mended my soul like a best friend
That's why I'll never accept or settle for less then
perfection from myself.

I wrote this for my gf... it's not done yet, I plan on makin it a little longer.. ll me ur thoughts on it please

by **soperman005** » Aug 22nd, '06, 00:12

anyone wanna share their thoughts on this?

by **,-,'-{Bar}-',-,** » Aug 22nd, '06, 00:43

its nice its deep

some smart rythming good job

by **soperman005** » Aug 22nd, '06, 01:43

thx a lot i appreciate it

by **stevethetruth** » Aug 22nd, '06, 01:52

dude so good so far lol
you should make a full song and record it and then give her a copy....that's what i would do :happy:

by **Lil Pimp Tell 'Em** » Aug 22nd, '06, 01:54

thats pretty good :smoking:

nice job

you should post the full thing when ur done :happy:

by **ThomasAguanis** » Aug 22nd, '06, 01:58

its nice man. good job.
keep working on it and post the full thing like lil pimp said.
and it'd be cool if you could record it and give it to her. im sure she'd love it.(any girlfriend would..well mine did :sweating:

)

by **soperman005** » Aug 22nd, '06, 02:07

ya i wanna record it but i dont have anyhthing to record with.. what do u guys use to record songs?? plus ive been tryin to make like a soft romantic type beat but its hard to make one

by **Lil Pimp Tell 'Em** » Aug 22nd, '06, 02:11

soperman005 wrote:ya i wanna record it but i dont have anyhthing to record with.. what do u guys use to record songs?? plus ive been tryin to make like a soft romantic type beat but its hard to make one

Umm u have to download a recording program, i recommend audacity, then u have to buy a mic :sweating:

OR u can ask bar, cuz he knows a way to record through headphones :confusion:

by **stevethetruth** » Aug 22nd, '06, 02:13

Lil' PimP wrote:
soperman005 wrote:ya i wanna record it but i dont have anyhthing to record with.. what do u guys use to record songs?? plus ive been tryin to make like a soft romantic type beat but its hard to make one

Umm u have to download a recording program, i recommend audacity, then u have to buy a mic OR u can ask bar, cuz he knows a way to record through headphones

yep that song you heard called what's up with that has my verses recorded with headphones lmao

by **Rae** » Aug 22nd, '06, 15:33

i like it

... i wrote sumthin 4 my bf ... (but urs is nicer than mine was) but he really liked mine ... so i bet your gf will really like it ... make sure you post the other part after you finish!

i wanna read it lol

by **soperman005** » Sep 6th, '06, 03:07

i udpated this and added to it today... give me ur thoughts please

unfinished rap for gf updated 9/5/06

unfinished rap for gf updated 9/5/06

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