Happy 40th B-Day

by **Ivy** » Aug 22nd, '06, 18:58

I wrote this for my father, and I want you to give your thoughts before I give it to him...

I read a poem on the Internet, on what a dad will do for his daughter; it was a really touching poem, truly tearful. However, as emotional as it was, as the poem unfolds, it only touches on some things, and the little ones at that. So I figured if I used sprinkles of what it said, and a load of my mind, I could make you reading this worthwhile. I can

by **Rae** » Aug 22nd, '06, 19:06

awwwww ... that was really good! i think he will love it!

by **Ivy** » Aug 22nd, '06, 19:08

MarshellBM wrote:awwwww ... that was really good! i think he will love it!

Thanks for the feeback, I can only hope

by **Rae** » Aug 22nd, '06, 19:10

im sure of it ...

by **rhiannon** » Aug 22nd, '06, 19:13

aww it made me cry...its really really good...i think he'll love it!

by **Rap Soul** » Aug 22nd, '06, 23:16

at the end you should write ahh just fuckin with yah i hate you. jp nah it was pretty good

by **Ivy** » Aug 22nd, '06, 23:20

Tonight has become a fucked up night, so when I gave it to him, he glanced at it and went into his room... :'(

by **Rap Soul** » Aug 22nd, '06, 23:23

yea you see it was good, but that hurts. to say that you have no relationship anymore. Im sure he somewhat appreciated it when he finds out the true moral of the literature. But, till then he looks at it as failure. DOnt take it to hard give him time

by **rhiannon** » Aug 23rd, '06, 08:48

Ivy wrote:Tonight has become a fucked up night, so when I gave it to him, he glanced at it and went into his room...

im sure he'll re-read it....i mean if u got sumin like that u'd wanna read it even if he acted like that to it....u shud try talkin 2 him or sumin

Happy 40th B-Day

Happy 40th B-Day

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