Rate my rap

[V-DogDaMenace]

-Gunnin-sound-with-a-sure-blast that BLOWS-THESE-HOOKS-AND-YA-ASS-DROPS
cuz I *Run-'round-this-herb-fast* like *YOGI-LOOKIN-FOR-CRACK-ROCKS*
-Im Blastin-Hard-On-This Foe...PLUS...(pfft)...THIS-ROOKIES-FEARIN-THIS
cuz the *Avatar-On-Ya-Pro looks like ya mic* said...*.FUCK-THIS-PUSSY-...PERIOD*
-Watch I'll Chop-This-Fakers-Ass cuz I MACK-THIS-BASTARD-WIT-HITS-MADLY
cuz notez will *Drop-This-Skater-Fast* like *ADAM-SANDLER-IN-"BIG-DADDY"*


-My ROCK-SPILLS-TA-GASH-THIS cuz me I DROP-ILL-WIT-MAD-HITS, the only reason things *bump under ya loops* is cuz ya *COCKS-FILLED-WIT-RASHES*
-Imma SHOOT-THIS-TYTE-AGAIN sochange ya sig cuz TONIGHT-IS-YA-END, how can ya *Bars-Be (barbie) duel structured* when this *DUDE-FIGHTS-WITH-A-KEN*
-LAY-FLOW-PRIME-TO-MURDA that'll really SHAKE-YO-MIND-N-SERVE-YA cuz my *flows gonna rise n hit ya home*...now u *MAY-PULL-MY-SIR-UP*(maple-syrup)
-No need bringin MORE-HEAT-FOR-THIS-SON cuz i get a W FOR-EACH-CORPSE-KRIT-BRUNG, WOW, *crooked dicks say battle* but these *WAR-E-WHORES-WIZ-DUMB*

[eminemcaparica]

i say "9", it wasa really cool, but whi you this:
"Gunnin-sound-with-a-sure-blast" whi you put - betwen the words

[V-DogDaMenace]

I PUT - BETWEEN THEM BCUZ..LOOK CHECK DIS OUT Gunnin-sound-with-a-sure-blast THEN A LIL LATER U SEE Run-'round-this-herb-fast AND IT RHYMES SO I MAKE EVERYTHING IN THE LINE RHYME... U FEEL ME?

[eminemcaparica]

u don't need to do that, we understad if you just make the normal way.
go see to the others rappers do

[V-DogDaMenace]

yo, i juss posted up another 1 of my raps, u should check it out

[V-DogDaMenace]

dis rap is dope, and no1 is votin, i guess my raps are to hot 4 dis punk ass
bitches to read, but if u do read it and vote what it deservs den... were cool
but u no my raps are hot...

[Hailie]

I rate it for 9 Nice work V-dog

[Vettori]

I give 10, Again, For like the 5th time, You keep surprising me dawg lmfao,
Keep it up bro,
10
10
10
lolz

"Faith"