You'd Wanna ...

[Rae]

remember when i asked you if you where with me,
what would you wanna do,
and you said i dunno,
well ima make you mind up for you,
youd wanna kiss me,
becuz you missed me,
youd wanna hold on to me forever,
becuz you cant bear the thougth of never,
youd wanna sing to me,
just becuz you love being with me,
youd wanna lock me away,
so we could always play,
youd wanna snuggle with me,
and think about whit it could be,
youd wanna show me how much you love me,
becuz we dift away so easily,
youd wanna go to the pool,
and make everyone jealous and drool,
youd wanna go on long walks,
and just talk and talk,
youd wanna look into my eyes,
and see that everything is fine,
and after all this happens you will never wanna leave my side.

[stevethetruth]

nice i liked this one too
keep it up and your gonna get better and better
i loved that pool and drool lines lol

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

nice work see you were looking at structure :d great work :d also getting the rap longer nice again your getting better :d

[Rae]

thanx you guys