Everything Will Be Okay

[Rae]

When I look into your eyes,
I see pain that I never realized,
Now I notice how much you take in on a regular basis,
See- I know how you feel,
At one point I was there,
Dont get me wrong its real hard to deal,
But you always got me, Im here,

So you dont have to make it harder than it is,
Im aware its none of my biz,
But will you let me in,
So I can take a peak,
At what your horiible problem is,
Come on buddie its ok, let me in,

Oh- Im sorry I didnt realized you got raped,
I've never had that happen to me,
Geez- You can let it all out,
Its ok to cry and shout,
Dont worry i wont tell a soul,
Remember we've been friends forever,
Ever since grade seven,
But im here *shhhh*, its ok im here

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

nice work rae real deep and your geting them longer and structure is getting betetr :d keep at it

[Rae]

nice work rae real deep and your geting them longer and structure is getting betetr :d keep at it

aw thanx! im tryin ...

and im really tryin 2 rhyme more and make em longer

thanx 4 tha feedback

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

nice work rae real deep and your geting them longer and structure is getting betetr :d keep at it

aw thanx! im tryin ...

and im really tryin 2 rhyme more and make em longer

thanx 4 tha feedback

yeh its working you may not notice yourself but tis working alot keep it up ya gonni be electric lol

[Rae]

nice work rae real deep and your geting them longer and structure is getting betetr :d keep at it

aw thanx! im tryin ...

and im really tryin 2 rhyme more and make em longer

thanx 4 tha feedback

yeh its working you may not notice yourself but tis working alot keep it up ya gonni be electric lol

yeah ur right ... i dont really notice ... but u and steve keep tellin me ... lol ... and thats what i need ... lol

so yeah ... THANK YOU! everytime i post i look 4ward 2 what u have 2 say about it

[katastrophe]

awesome job. i really liked it

[Rae]

awesome job. i really liked it

thanx!!!

[stevethetruth]

yo ash that's your best one yet keep it up lol

i'll ttyl

[Infliction]

very very good was it a tru story?

[C-Game]

sounds like s true story to me

[Rae]

thanx 4 the feedback everybody! yes its a true story ... since everyone wanted 2 know

[.Giorgo.]

Aaw. That's really nice. You work the same like me, with those comma's .

But about the song. In a song like this is rhyme not necesarry.
It goes about the lines and the tekst. And in thiscase. It's a true story, so i loved it. You must understeand the lines and rhyme doesn't matter.
[That's how i think]

[C-Game]

yea i totally i agree with georgio
in a rap i think rhymin is where the skill lies
but in a song its about the verbal strength
and rae ur doin that now

[Rae]

thanx you guys!!!