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My New Rap From V-Dog

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My New Rap From V-Dog

Postby V-DogDaMenace » Aug 19th, '05, 17:51

Watch your ass GASP from HURTFUL-EXASPERATION
Dis' FAGS FACIN' ELIMINATION by VERBAL-ASSASSINATION!/
Its A-SHAME-WHEN an LAME has an ACTIVE IMAGINATION
Beat me?! Battlin-ya' can gimme' "WACKNESS" CONTAMINATION!/
You still piss in da bed and need PLASTIC MATRESS LAMINATION
I was BATTLIN' BACK-WHEN you were still PRACTICIN' MASTERBATION!!!/
You're MAD-N-SHAKEN cause you got NO-RIGHT to HOLD-MICS
You got NO-LIFE ; you shouldna' won a SOLE-FIGHT on GOLD-MIC!/
You got NO-HYPE and you flow-n-write WEAK and DEFENSELESS
I'm lyrically RELENTLESS; my SENTENCES will BEAT you SENSELESS/
Yo' DEFEAT COMMENCES cause you're USIN' A-WACK-FLOW
In FACT YO, you couldn't spit if you were CHEWIN' TABACCO/
You CRACK- HO! Just "NO SHOW" you KNOW-I-SHOW-NO-PITY!
I'll lay you flat on yo' CHEST like a HO-WIT'-NO-TITTIES!/
NO REALLY, I'm not here to KILL or HURT-YOUR-SPIRITZ
But you need a sign that reads," WILL WORK FOR LYRICS!"/
YOUR-FIRST-APPEARANCE on G-Mic was WEAK-WIT'-NO-STYLE
Now, finish readin' yo WORST DEFEAT and then DELETE-YO'-PROFILE!/



Your RHYMES are COMPILATIONS of IRRELEVANT PHRASES
My RHYMES are COMPLICATED like INTELLIGENCE MAZES/
You're OVERRATED-n-TASTELESS, so HATED-n-RACIST
Dat my FLOW EXPLODES and BLOWS you TOTALLY FACELESS/
I BOASTFULLY MAKE HITS; you MOSTLY JUST FAKE HITS
REQUOTIN' DA' SAME SH*TS you WROTE FOR SOME LAME B*TCH/
HOPIN' MY FLAMES MISS? And get SMOKED INTO BAKED BITS
And get "RAPED" LIKE A NAKED CHICK SHAKIN' SOME FAKE TITS/
You couldn't CONTAIN DIS' if you "BIT" like INSANE PITS (pitbulls)
TaGz, You got about as much "flow" AS A DRAINED DITCH/
My CLIPS GET RELOADED the SAME AS DA' MATRIX
Your LAME wins only SUSTAIN you KNOWIN' DA' BASICS/
EXPLAIN DIS': How yo' SPITS got ME BLEEDIN'-n-HURT?
You couldn't "RIP" if you were a fat B*TCHE'S MEDIUM SHIRT!/
SEE THE ALERT? TaGZ, you need a miracle: YOU SHOULD HIDE
And REALIZE YOU'LL LOSE-n-DIE BY LYRICAL SUICIDE "
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Postby eminemcaparica » Aug 19th, '05, 17:58

now that's great

propz
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yo

Postby V-DogDaMenace » Aug 19th, '05, 18:00

Thanks homie, i made all by myself imma make sum new raps ryte now or soon, so be on the look out
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Postby eminemcaparica » Aug 19th, '05, 18:04

i will be
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Postby shadypelkey » Aug 20th, '05, 04:35

are you black or white
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Postby Darjan333 » Aug 20th, '05, 13:24

he is yellow :D :D :D
i rated 1
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Postby shadypelkey » Aug 20th, '05, 19:21

yellow? your fucked kid
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Postby V-DogDaMenace » Aug 20th, '05, 19:23

im white/hispanic homie

y?
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Postby 4D » Aug 21st, '05, 01:09

I gave you an 8 man, don`t heed Darjan, he doesn`t know shit. That rhyme was real hot, better than ur last one.

I wanna see something relevant to what or who your rapping with or against next time, that proves ur rhymes aren`t just copied and pasted from some other emcee board!!

you gonna battle me??
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Postby eminemcaparica » Aug 22nd, '05, 00:28

darjan, if you keep tocking shit to mi homies and about tupac i'm going to you poor country and i will kick you dumb ass, you lil bitch, muthafucker.

go ahead V, i'm portuguese, my country is richt beside of spain, and the spain ppl have HOT blood, just like us, let put some fire on that lil muthafucker darjan?
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Postby eminemcaparica » Aug 22nd, '05, 00:30

shit, my homie V, alreadi diss darjan ass like fire
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Postby V-DogDaMenace » Aug 22nd, '05, 03:11

hell yea mothafuckaz, i posted up sum new shits check those raps out
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