Bar and TheTruth - Untitled

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Bar and TheTruth - Untitled
Bar in Bold

im a scottish rapper not to be laughed at,
first of a dead breed, im destroying history at the age of 15 ,
i got the determination for this shit and the brain,
now its just one big ass waiting game ,
check at me and youll see i got no patience ,
so imma go into overdrive, make sure a make it ,
you see.......
boldy busting bullets dont happen for me,
fastly fucking fanny's what a be ,
punishing people for putting pussy infront of me ,
coz ill capture it, n rapture it, for fun see
rappidly ripping yer roster for fun ,
madly making me great ,
waxing women were its wet ,
ive completely went into randomness you see ,
who gives a fuck imma say it one time imma P.I.M.P ,
fuck every girl ill make her fuck me coz in bed im a dream boy b,
coz my penis is erect and a cant handle looking at yer thong , come on ,
let me in, a got to be , i neeed pussy , girl FUCK ME....

see its Bar and the truth ,blowing through ya roof ,
lyrically great, 100 girls at wer feet,
no one can touch, us you can see,
bar and the truth , TRSHADYY, (reapeat)


Yo that

[stevethetruth]

alright i got one thing to say THIS TRACK IS GONNA OWNNNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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alright i got one thing to say THIS TRACK IS GONNA OWNNNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i second that

[ThomasAguanis]

was pretty good guys. some parts coulc have been better such as:

The plan is not to give up the plan is about to erupt/
Bar is crazy with that style of his he

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

was pretty good guys. some parts coulc have been better such as:

The plan is not to give up the plan is about to erupt/
Bar is crazy with that style of his he

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This is better than love songs


Bar has some nice multi's going. Try and make lines same length though keeping a patterm. It should flow better.

Truth..that was pretty wack. Most didn't even rhyme.

Both of you could try meaphors and punchlines in there too.

hey man thats a bit harsh.....it rythmes

We

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

Very simple though.


And hey, if i'd of just said great, what could he of had to improve on?

lol i know but you could have said like its wack because you rytming is to simple or something lol

[stevethetruth]

lol thanks for that harsh feedback but you know i'm glad with the outcome so that's all that matters ya know lol

look the only differentce me and bar have is that bar has that determination and i have nothing lol

that's all i have to say

but yeah thanks for the feed back i'm just better at writing love songs lol

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

lol thanks for that harsh feedback but you know i'm glad with the outcome so that's all that matters ya know lol

look the only differentce me and bar have is that bar has that determination and i have nothing lol

that's all i have to say

but yeah thanks for the feed back i'm just better at writing love songs lol

lol yeh im happy wit da outcome and i still think its gonni be great audio

[katastrophe]

some lines could be better but good job overall guys. the song should be good