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Crazy rhyme (No offence, just goin with the flow)

Postby 4D » Aug 29th, '06, 13:50

It`s eight past one, time to rape fat nuns,
Bust in a face and scream taste that cum,
I ain`t half dumb, I take a bum and lick it,
Even if it`s shitty or splashed with pissy liquid,
Sissy`s kick it when i tell him lose the habit,
I fucked Roger`s Jessica and asked him who`s the rabbit,
Choose to have it, or opt for none, bitch decide
So i can get to work forcing this dick inside,
My stiff is wide and long and hard, so strong ya scarred,
Your thong is marred with the stains of cum and blood,
Truth or lies you just got brutalised by the fuckin stud
Spunk`ll flood out ya pussy gushing like flushing the toilet
I`m in a good mood, so don`t call cops start blushing n spoil it,
I know ya fucking enjoyed it, you were screaming in ecstacy,
Or was it agony, I gave it hard with speed and intensity,
What ya need is a test ta see if it`s pregnancy or not,
If it is, abortion`s the only life expectancy it`s got,
Ya won`t never need a cot, Foetus gonna bleed and rot,
But, I see a slot, a glimmer, a ray of light or silver lining
A run of luck you never ever considered finding,
After dinner dining, one day, you think a walk sounds cool,
But ya bump into me again and it`s time for round two.
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Aug 29th, '06, 14:13

:laughing: roflmao thats hillarious :laughing: great work :laughing:
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Postby DOPE » Aug 29th, '06, 17:17

oh man Fordie this is tight!

ain`t half dumb, I take a bum and lick it,
Even if it`s shitty or splashed with pissy liquid

my fav line
"It's amazing that the amount of news that happens in the world every day always just exactly fits the newspaper."

My basic disk will make you take a razor to your wrist
Make you satanistic
Make you take the pistol to your face
N place the clip N cock it back
N let it go until your brains are rippin out your skull so bad
To sew you back would be a waste of stitches


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Postby C-Game » Aug 29th, '06, 20:04

:whistle:
nice
fordie... the new james brody.............
nice rhymes
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Postby 4D » Aug 30th, '06, 18:10

Haha, thanks for the props! :D
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Postby AspirinE » Aug 30th, '06, 18:13

This should get a video! :smoking:
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Postby 4D » Aug 30th, '06, 18:15

ASP wrote:This should get a video! :smoking:


LMAO

And G Killa, i`m not insured so go fuck a whore!! :D
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Postby 4D » Aug 30th, '06, 18:25

Well that`s what ya get for doin her in the ass, battyboy! :whistle:
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Postby 4D » Aug 30th, '06, 18:45

You mean, you were gay but worth the poke! :whistle:
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Postby sinemm » Aug 31st, '06, 09:53

thats cool has great rhymes well done congs..
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Postby Kez » Sep 2nd, '06, 03:23

It all kicked ass

Those first two lines though, they were my faves.
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