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Time to end

Postby Vengeance » Sep 1st, '06, 21:40

Dear Lord,

you know ive been down lately,
stressing, fighting, drinking, thoughts so depressing,
causing me to hurt myself, just not good for my safety,
spoke to a few people, but just not working for me,
theres too many people to ache over,
too many tears cried, too many stones carved, (grave stones)
i know i havent got it bad, what about young ones that are starved,
who cut their wrists because of that,
then their gone, never to come back,
a good government is what we lack,
to prevent poverty properly and fully,
and never has time to sit back,
no cups of tea, no TV,
but piles of paperwork and meetings,
NO, we go to war, ready to die in any explosion,
he risks his own country to die in destruction,
wipe us out and let the iraqis run our home without disruption,
but we all die one day,
doesnt matter how, it'll happen one way,
we all live to die,
our purpose on this earth is to die,
so live everyday as if it's your last.
forget about the bad things in your past,
this is a letter to you, but for me, its time to leave,
now i have got things off my chest, and said my piece,
its time for me to say goodbye today,
please dont mourn or cry for me while im away.

written on: 01/09/06
at: 1:51am
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Sep 1st, '06, 22:21

thats what ya call a rap man :worship: no gangstas guns bitches cars pure feelings and true happenings nice rythm man :worship:
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Postby Vengeance » Sep 1st, '06, 22:45

thanks bar..and no i dotn rap about guns and killing people coz i know i aint do that in real life
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Sep 1st, '06, 22:50

Dark_Angel wrote:thanks bar..and no i dotn rap about guns and killing people coz i know i aint do that in real life


yeh man i h8 all this gangsta stuff from ppl on forums coz you kwno they lying most times :D anywae congratz on the rythm again
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Postby sinemm » Sep 2nd, '06, 09:57

yea thats really good..the rhymes r also good too..nice..liked it.. :) ;)
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