i write what i write (incomplete)

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far from finished
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Chorus
i write what i write to express what i feel,
i write what i write to try keep life real,
i wirte what i write coz thats what a do,
i write what i write to help me pull through,

Verse1
this is just what a do , you shouldt try it to ,
it helps me through this life , do you need help to ,
i write these words like emotional bombs
they turn me on and off like girls thongs
if you dont feel what i feel dont listen to my work
if you feel what i feel then listen to it work
my words hit sharp like a fork
im gonni blow up once a hit new york
coz you tell the way i right my rythms
i right them with emotion like the good old times
i dont follow this gangsta music
if a could get a truck ad move it
kick it out fo the buisness for good
bring back real rap from the real hood
give me a hand clap if you think a should
its all good , coming from the hood , if you think a should , give me a hand clap dude,
summed up 3 lines in one rythm, this is my time ,
dont get me wrong im still far from my prime,
bring the beat back this chorus is mine,
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just looking for feed

[stevethetruth]

damn your killing it here man i really like this song i can't wait for the final outcome and the sneek preview of the audio lol

[BaZZ]

thats really cool man... as said im looking forward for the whole thing to come out and the audio...

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thx for the feedback two of yous

and anymore ?