another one....

[Flamez]

hearin' voices inside my ears tryin' to understand what they sayin'
sittin' on the church bench with my eyes closed just prayin'
all of a sudden start feelin' extreme severe chest pain
feel weak with my veins bleeding no response from my brain
stressed out feels like no life is left gettin' death condemned
too many troubled problems feelin' like a math book full of em'
start gettin' flashbacks rememberin' my past memories seein' visions
envisionin' weird things they doing me an incision after that car collision
bullets struck all over my body like body pierced earrings
police thinkin' i'm a dangerous criminal so have to go to court hearings
fuck this fast forward this to the future where i see myself a superstar
lights camera action start rappin' for the crowd my true fans spittin' bars
breezin' thru like the wind blowin' smokin' cigars playin' with an electrical guitar
from rap to heavy metal to hard rock fuck that lets go scroll back to rap
hello guess whos back flamez you best believe give me the mic and my gat to start bustin' caps
bashin' these fake ass ratz killin' them dead on there tracks attackin' viciously
sendin' conspicous words lyrically assasinatin' comin' spittin' ambitiously
actin' suspiciously like i just created a murdeous crime droppin' sick rhymez
but i'm trapped in an animal cage a violent rage erupts suddenly sometimes
but i'm jus' rushin' bustin' thru these raps tresspassing breakin' thru glass
makin' nerds Crap in they pants when i come bustin' poppin' a 44 up in they ass

[Block]

lines were a little long to keep a decent flow, and alotta fillers. but nice concept. keep droppin duke.

[Flamez]

yeah lines were a lil' long...and can u tell me what fillers are don't know whats that lol or anyone...but thanx anyways...

[ThomasAguanis]

nice work man, keep it up.


and by fillers he ment words not needed in it that are there to fill space..such as "like, the, ect.." well i think thats what he ment but thats my definition his may be different

[Flamez]

thanx thomas

oh ok thanx i see man...

[Block]

nice work man, keep it up.


and by fillers he ment words not needed in it that are there to fill space..such as "like, the, ect.." well i think thats what he ment but thats my definition his may be different

precisely.

The language of Hip-Hop is universal.

^^ Fuck, That's some quoteable shit, haha!