Pissed off

[Vettori]

I try to sit, and take all this relentless shit,
Parents screamin off there lungs to the point that im pissed,
I picked up my pistol, took a shot but i missed,
Hit a curb smashed my face off a wall made a bricks,
Almost broke my fuckin jaw, Right in front of two hot chicks,
They walkin by whisperin, "Ha look he's so slick"
Well bitch your opinion means nothing to me,
Your dumb ass is too blind whats really Hiding in me,
You can't critisize, But your too blind to see,
You better take off in the count of 1 2 3
I'm sick of all haters, and shit that can be,
Nobody, havin no faith or ability,How shitty
To actually take the time, to get to no me,
But all these hoe's do is expect just to blow me,
Well fuck it that sounds good, But i want more,
Then a bitch who i can pay 5 bucks for, (what a whore)
Then a knock at the door, it's her fuckin father,
What the fuck did you do to my innocent daughter,
Ill smash you the fuck out and sock your mother,
As i lay lifeless half dead on the floor,
God why do you hate me just punish me more..

"Faith"

[eminemcaparica]

iau, man, i love it.very good really

[Vettori]

Thanx man, Just i had a bad day that day lolz,
I fuckin fell of my bike, and smashed my jaw off the sidewalk lolz for real,
Just had to write about that day, and to add it got worse but meh, thanx for votes and compliments

[Vettori]

Can anyone tell me if they like this, Id say it's not bad, I had a bad day lolz,
but meh, Cmon people rate it plzzz

"Faith"

[Zare]

Nice man!

one of the best ive heard on this site.

What the fuck did you do to my innocent daughter,
Ill smash you the fuck out and sock your mother,
As i lay lifeless half dead on the floor,
God why do you hate me just punish me more..

thats a nice rhyme i would have never thought of that heh.

[Vettori]

Thanx man
lolz, for the compliments,
I guess it's aight, Ima keep writing so,
keep ur eyes open :P
peace man

"Faith"

[X VDoG X]

nice shit my dude, u no who dis is... its VDogDaMenace, but i 4got my password, lol

[Vettori]

Yea man i know who it is bro :P
Been a lil while man

"Faith"