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Battle Rhyme

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Battle Rhyme

Postby Kez » Sep 29th, '06, 19:01

Just some battle rhyme i came up with
Don't take it serious

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You want to change this from simple text into a complex issue?
That's fine! I'll rip open your muscle tissue
And pull you apart limb by limb verbally, i'll finish you
And then lift your wrist onto a work surface and slit you!
Why's it always gotta be a fucking chore
For me to put a rhyme here?! It's rap, nothing more
So what if i don't use the same kind of shit as you, can't you stomach, whore?
Well sorry, but your luck is worn!
Cause i could give a fuck whether or not you gonna praise this
In fact, you might as well be a sexist AND racist!
Cause i don't care who you are, you could be the president Bush
And could ban it, god, calm down, need a sedetive much?
So remember, try to battle me or rattle me
Or hassle me, regardless i'll kick your ass happily!
Just say the magic words and i'll spit out a magic verse
As easy as the nastiest burp from the fattest jerk!

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Re: Battle Rhyme

Postby Marth » Sep 29th, '06, 19:11

good one:D:D :worship:
The world has gone crazy like eminem on kim
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Postby Restlesswon » Oct 1st, '06, 14:57

pretty good man
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