The Aggressor

[4D]

When i write rhymes my wild mind climbs and flows like the Nile,
You must be blind if you arrive to find you don`t like the style.
It`s prose with guile so don`t revile, cos, it's above your capacity,
I love your tenacity, but, relax it G. Just fuckin stop attackin me,
Or bust a rap n battle me, But, not if your pride is a priority.
Or, you`ll end up, spent snuffed and undermined as a minority.
Cos I rhyme with authority when I compose a prose or battle rap,
When the aggressor stresses the pressure, you're boney back'll snap.
Have you rolling handicap, like professor X. Make you feel the lesser sex.
Wordin' harrassment a worst embarrassment, I deal distress with text.
You`re feet respect the rest, so take a break, D'ya get it Mr. Paralysed,
You`re not sick emceeing so stick to being a kid who is a fan of rhymes.
I magnified your weakness with English as supreme as my technique is,
You`re style is mild while mine's constantly too extreme and freakish
I`ll bring this sequence of genius like expletives to an abrupt halt now,
If you're unimpressed, I suggest make-up 'n' dress in ya mums ball gown.

[PmT-Faith]

sometimes two many big words, make it sound a little forced, But once again lol, im lovin it, I think its great to mix simplistic sowrds, and those bigger ones, out of experience, sounds little better, But yo haha I liek ur multies Quite alot lol, a part that made me think sick was this :

Just fuckin stop attackin me,
Or bust a rap n battle me, But, not if your pride is a priority.
Or, you`ll end up, spent snuffed and undermined as a minority

[4D]

sometimes two many big words, make it sound a little forced, But once again lol, im lovin it, I think its great to mix simplistic sowrds, and those bigger ones, out of experience, sounds little better, But yo haha I liek ur multies Quite alot lol, a part that made me think sick was this :

Just fuckin stop attackin me,
Or bust a rap n battle me, But, not if your pride is a priority.
Or, you`ll end up, spent snuffed and undermined as a minority

Cool, thanks!!

I also like that part you quoted, has a good sound and rhythm to it.

[PmT-Faith]

Agreed , once again great Job man, U Should think about recording eh ... don't even worry about ur age lol, i think it would be fun to hear, unless you got a really Hard to live life, or keepin shit organized or w/e its all good, Just a suggestion PCE

[4D]

Agreed , once again great Job man, U Should think about recording eh ... don't even worry about ur age lol, i think it would be fun to hear, unless you got a really Hard to live life, or keepin shit organized or w/e its all good, Just a suggestion PCE

I keep sayin i`m gonna do it, but, never actually do. I don`t have a proper mic, and don`t know much about rercording audio on my p.c, so i`m a bit of a dunce in that department.

Plus for some reason, i don`t know why, when i rap, i rap in an american accent, it`s bizarre.

Thanks for your comments, and no i`m not too old to rap, just to old to have ambitions of a rap career. P.s 28 is not very old.

And your as young as the woman ya feel, get me?