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True love (final verison)

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True love (final verison)

Postby stevethetruth » Oct 7th, '06, 18:02

You ever get that feeling that you have true love
You found that one person you can truly love
That one person you
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Postby lostdaze18 » Oct 7th, '06, 18:06

Steve... this song is def one of my favorites that u have ever done.... u have a great talent :)
~If the eyes are the doorway to your soul then why are my stares always blank~
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Postby stevethetruth » Oct 7th, '06, 19:23

lostdaze18 wrote:Steve... this song is def one of my favorites that u have ever done.... u have a great talent :)


thanks jen means a lot to me

thanks for the feedback
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Postby stevethetruth » Oct 8th, '06, 01:38

come on 60 views and one feedback COME ON PEOPLE!!!
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Postby stevethetruth » Oct 8th, '06, 03:01

ok fucking people leave feedback!!! :angry:
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Postby Inches » Oct 8th, '06, 03:11

i like it
i left feeed already before final and i stick to ma word
nice man
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Postby stevethetruth » Oct 8th, '06, 03:44

inches2010 wrote:i like it
i left feeed already before final and i stick to ma word
nice man


thanks for the feedback

i was getting annoyed with no feed lol

glad you like it man :D
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Postby Inches » Oct 8th, '06, 03:46

steverocks88 wrote:
inches2010 wrote:i like it
i left feeed already before final and i stick to ma word
nice man


thanks for the feedback

i was getting annoyed with no feed lol

glad you like it man :D


soo im guessin you got a girl?
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Postby BLAHBLAHBLAH » Oct 8th, '06, 03:47

i read it once before so i have 2 views
but here is my feedback

I really like the whole thing but the first verse is the best! it's really good i like it
I act like shit don't phase me
inside it drives me crazy
my insecurities could eat me alive!
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Postby stevethetruth » Oct 8th, '06, 03:55

inches2010 wrote:
steverocks88 wrote:
inches2010 wrote:i like it
i left feeed already before final and i stick to ma word
nice man


thanks for the feedback

i was getting annoyed with no feed lol

glad you like it man :D


soo im guessin you got a girl?
\


surprisenly nope :(
but i'm looking for one lol
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Postby stevethetruth » Oct 8th, '06, 03:57

BLAHBLAHBLAH wrote:i read it once before so i have 2 views
but here is my feedback

I really like the whole thing but the first verse is the best! it's really good i like it


cool thanks :)
glad you like it and yep i love the first verse too but i think the second one is better :p

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Postby lostdaze18 » Oct 8th, '06, 04:00

Maybe if u wernt so picky u would have one by now... lol....
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Postby stevethetruth » Oct 8th, '06, 04:02

lostdaze18 wrote:Maybe if u wernt so picky u would have one by now... lol....
~Jen~

ha ha jen

you said it yourself i have normal standards lol i ain't that picky
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Postby stevethetruth » Oct 8th, '06, 18:37

yo anymore feedback?
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Postby Inches » Oct 8th, '06, 21:20

steverocks88 wrote:
inches2010 wrote:
steverocks88 wrote:
inches2010 wrote:i like it
i left feeed already before final and i stick to ma word
nice man


thanks for the feedback

i was getting annoyed with no feed lol

glad you like it man :D


soo im guessin you got a girl?
\


surprisenly nope :(
but i'm looking for one lol

ohhh
thought you did
well i wrote one for my girl maybe i should post
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30 bars lol but its not that great i dont think
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