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Postby Marth » Oct 9th, '06, 15:48

haha... wadda'p

I rap like a lirical mage
i'm a mirical on stage
you can stay in your cage
before i break down in rage
yeah, what ya wanna see
I'm a butterfly
but who the fuck you think, yeah, what am i
I'm just spittin my rhymewords, to everyone
even in a batle, when you can't
I just need someone
I just needsomeone i can hold on to, t's somtin iI want
cuz I want a girl, and I want a girl that wants a man
you think this shit is quickly done
but no no, becuz i keep alone
but where the fuck can i go, without a home
I need a wife to love
childrens to hold on
S home, to grove
but my mind is going me above
The words are talking into my brains
but when they talk, they hit me insane
They're a bullet of pain
stop the cycling, this is a bullet of rain
people are dying becuz they don't got enough grain
but i'm dying, becuz i got nobody, to tell what i've gain'd

She was the one again'st i twirld
She never had her hair curled
but i can't resist heer eyes
shadow make up, she gave me enough denies
but what does she wants? some rice
sometime i wished that i died, but that girl, gave me the critica dickride,
she gave me her dickpride, I waked up in the midle of the night,
And i knew she wasn't at my side

here can i go without a girl
where can i go without her?
where can i go, I'm fucking alone
wherethefuck can i go, without a home

Yo mate just shut the fuck up
cuz you know she wanted to suck your cuck
you know who wanted to own here
it was you , but you coudn't cloned'her
she's bringin home deseasez
She jumped up and down on your penis
yo bitch, you've seen this
YOU wanted to crawl between her hips
Bitch, You listend to eminem: drips
to guilty consiecence,
but it was YOUR fault,you didn't thought about the counseqeunce
so you know what I think: FUCK THIS MESS
let her rot, in her skin
cuz she wasn't wrong, you wanted to inn
her, you loved all of here, even her skinn
even her hair, even her chin

"yeah dawg, ofcoarse i did, fuck this kid
fuck this bitch, fuck this shit
he's in a evilbitchfit, you loved her
and that's how it supposed to be
buddy, it's all closed for me
she sayed; give another rose to me
and you did, but she used overdose's you see
she didn't cared about you, unfortunatly...."

shut the fuck up, she rosted me!"

here can i go without a girl
where can i go without her?
where can i go, I'm fucking alone
wherethefuck can i go, without a home

yo, but the most i love eyes they're speakin
they will always stay there, so that's where i always stay seeking
I like them all, especially with make up
i don't understand, why she wanted to break up
they don't want me, what's wrong with my head
Why she left me, she's dealing with the dead
If i don't get one in a week, I'm turning maaaaad
I need someone who cares about me, who just gives a fuck
I 'll never give one, not even about this shit's up
I need to get ridd of
my feelings NOW, before I blow my dick off
what you wanna do without me
cuz you guys keep fucking about me
the bitches can go out, free
but what now, wannabee
she hurles with the enemy
Girls, all in my family
but the problem is, that i stay alon
and my dick is getting litle, like a gnome
yeah, once, i was a leprachaun with a big dick
now I spit, to everyone who says"STEP THAT ONE, without a clit


Please leef feedback, I know it's wack, but please say what could be better and what could be cutted out
The world has gone crazy like eminem on kim
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Postby Coccoa » Oct 9th, '06, 22:33

After that, i really start to understand why she aint there with u.
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Postby Coccoa » Oct 9th, '06, 22:37

When he wants it, he wants it.
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Postby Marth » Oct 10th, '06, 19:52

yeah i'm laughing my ass of tho, modfo
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Postby Coccoa » Oct 10th, '06, 20:00

Ok.
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Postby Marth » Oct 14th, '06, 17:36

I thinkyou don't really understand
there are two sides like ( guilty considence)

the bad site, that says that i'm bad, and the good side, that she got to come back, and that We love eacother
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