Simple 8 Bars

[.Giorgo.]

A battle against Marth. It's pretty simple, but i want you to look at my first battle and this. Look at my grammar, am i better or not ?

Yo,, Check this shit out //

His motherfuckin' name is Marth.
But he's a bitch, he aint smart.

I'll kill this bitch,quick, run if you can.
Ur just some n00bie, in some gaming-clan.

You fucked my mum, yeah that's the best u can get.
I fucked your hot pregnant sister. Yeah i'll bet.

You're funny, but i'll still diss you, lil' snitch.
I'l hurt you, just like ur mama smacked you, that bitch.

Go runnin', block by block for some crack.
U tripped up mo'fucker, do somethin', make a track.

Or don't u have enough money for it, u poor.
You even't have money to eat. Open a new door.

A door that's open's a new and better live.
But dude, get real, wake up, take a dive.

My rhymes go into ur brain like a bullet.
Go home, stop wastin' my time, just run-it.

I'll end this shit now, i don't wanna diss you more.
I don't wanna embarase you more, go listen' to hardcore.

[Marth]

I hope so but get better lines and rhymes

[Jay-19]

Ehh...

[.Giorgo.]

Man, say somethin' or say some tips.
If u don't say anything, don't bother to post.

[Inches]

Man, say somethin' or say some tips.
If u don't say anything, don't bother to post.

hmm
work on your vocabulary,
try to throw in some multis