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Some psycho-shit I wrote yesterday...

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Some psycho-shit I wrote yesterday...

Postby Jay-19 » Oct 12th, '06, 14:13

I'm just tryin' to get rid of some frustration
When I'm choppin' up people at the busstation
Depressed like fuck with a dick smaller than peas
Bought a penis-pump and now it's startin' to increase
Now it's 2 inches longer than it was before
Not a big deal since it was none inches small
If my IQ gets lower I will sink through the floor
That's what my relatives always is discussing
My girlfriend hates me, she thinks that I'm disgusting
I'm cussin', and crushing her head against the concrete
Then a voice in my head tell me: mission complete
My best friend is the Devil, Jason, Michael Myers
Take pictures of my dead girl and hand 'em out as flyers
I use to mix glass in the soup and serve my guests
So what if you don't like it, I couldn't care less
With a gun in my left hand, I went to the mall
Shot everyone at Burger King and grilled Paul Wall
Now it's my turn to make the internet go nuts
Video-tape myself when I'm cuttin' out my guts
And put it up on youtube, the next to die is you dude
I'm maybe crazy cuz my braincell's out of function
I'll kill you and then I will put you in the trunk! Done!


My mom doesn't like me cuz I kill, she's disappointed
But you don't have to come around my victims just avoid it
Cut up your pregnant girlfriend, take out the baby, boil it
I insist to be twisted, slit bitches with scissors
Ducktape motherfuckers in my basement
I never stop to amaze to your own amazement
I love to cut my face with rusty razorblades
I screwed my chances to get after-school detention
I raped the fucking bitch with only cruel intentions
To make some green fast, I sellin' all my seamon
Make teenagers dreamin 'bout killers and demons
I'm steaming, I'm mean and I breathe to be evil
Dominated by the dark side of my person
I was rotten from my birth I began to steal purses
Stealin' a fiends needle, just so I can get AIDS
Accidentally cut off your head when I was cutt'n your braids
Hey ya'll, I'm Jay! Is there a cure for being gay?
I hate bitches, break bitches, rape bitches, spray bitches
Say to bitches, what?... Please, get down on one knee
I'ma fuck her eyes till the bitch can't see

:8) Tell me what ya think..
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Postby Jay-19 » Oct 13th, '06, 11:19

Do do think it's good or what? :whistle:
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Postby Inzanity » Oct 13th, '06, 12:36

that was really twisted, and extremely disturbing, but for the most part there were alot of multis which was good it was alright but still disturbing.
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Postby Jay-19 » Oct 15th, '06, 19:27

G_killa Posted: Fri Oct 13, 2006 11:40 am

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doesnt involve teabaging,clown face,people being shitted on and eating it,lesbians with dicks doing anal,pictures of syphallis,testicles being crushed

but apart from that was aight man


LOL!
Unfortunatley, I couldn't fit all those subjects in the beat, but I'ma do one more with those involved! :D
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Postby Zowie06 » Oct 16th, '06, 15:35

:confusion: :confusion: :confusion:
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Postby Jay-19 » Oct 18th, '06, 19:30

What Zowie? :confusion:
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Postby Hypno » Oct 20th, '06, 22:28

It was Pretty funny i like that psycho shit.
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Postby Jay-19 » Oct 20th, '06, 23:43

Thank you Hypno :smoking: I like it 2!
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