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Just Somthin'

Postby Hadez » Oct 13th, '06, 07:13

Now look at you, ur hesitating
I got you nervous from all this mess im making
I'm focused like im constipated and like juice i concentrated
And contemplated on having u decapitated
Leakin liquids like u masterbaited
I'm makin sure none of u bastards make it
Smeared u easily like cream cheese
Leavin the hospital with more stitches than jean seems
I'll cut you because you want to
Have holes bigga than slut cunts do
I'll call 911 n tell'em its ergent
Cuz im seein more red than Tide detergant


lemme know wutchu think.
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Oct 13th, '06, 08:37

some nice rythms in there , liked it man , good work :D
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Postby Hadez » Oct 13th, '06, 09:06

^thankz! :happy:
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