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Raise The Steaks Lyrics

Postby ThomasAguanis » Oct 17th, '06, 04:30

eh figured I'd post these just for the hell of it. I still never recorded this whole song but I will get to it eventually. Possibly soon. Anywho, feedback would be nice saying what you likeed and what you didnt. Also I'd like to see if people understand what I was trying to do with this as I had an idea as I was writigng it. I'll explain if necessary(or if you ask haha) The lines may seem uneven but over the beat I wrote them to they fit perfectly with the way I rap it.:

    Raise the steaks or I
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Postby ThomasAguanis » Oct 18th, '06, 03:40

Sarah wrote:Fucking amazing work :worship:


thanks a lot Sarah :flower:


hopefully this will show some people here how to actually write.
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Postby stevethetruth » Oct 18th, '06, 03:54

ThomasAguanis wrote:
Sarah wrote:Fucking amazing work :worship:


thanks a lot Sarah :flower:


hopefully this will show some people here how to actually write.



you better not be talking about me ha ha


but damn that rap was fucking CRAZY
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Oct 18th, '06, 18:31

you ever think its time were we got to stop living up here and start living down here ?

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awesome shit :D
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Postby ThomasAguanis » Oct 18th, '06, 18:35

steverocks88 wrote:you better not be talking about me ha ha


but damn that rap was fucking CRAZY
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nah its not you haha.
and thanks steve :8)

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Postby ThomasAguanis » Oct 18th, '06, 18:37

Bar wrote:you ever think its time were we got to stop living up here and start living down here ?

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awesome shit :D


wait.. what does that mean? :confusion:

and thanks for the feed bar :8)
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Oct 18th, '06, 18:45

ThomasAguanis wrote:
Bar wrote:you ever think its time were we got to stop living up here and start living down here ?

:laughing:


awesome shit :D


wait.. what does that mean? :confusion:

and thanks for the feed bar :8)


:laughing:

you got to stop being so good and start bringing it down :sweating:
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