I Made A Mistake (Made For Fun)

[SajN]

Its a song I made for fun ..
Ido not really have a daughter ...
I am only 15 :P

Dont take it serious:

Lyric

Title: Mistake
Artist: Non-Stop

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[C-Game]

Its a song I made for fun ..
Ido not really have a daughter ...
I am only 15 :P

Dont take it serious:

Lyric

Title: Mistake
Artist: Non-Stop

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[C-Game]

the structure was oki
yea the meanin is nice and we get wat ur sayin
english can be stepped up a notch
nice stuff anyway bro
write more and ull step it up

[SajN]

I am from Norway, therfore I am not so good in english
sry :P

But thanks

[SajN]

BUMP

Someone please write her ?

I need some answers

[Aft3rmath]

Sick bro keep up the good work, Ill hit u up wit a line or two

You see these lines I spit into the mic I admit, arnt always true, most of its bull shit, but if you like to listen take a minute and sit, while i throw these rhymes in ya face like spit, Burning, your eyes, churning, your mind, twisting while my words bliss, and your ears bleed, life's end is closer than it seems, you breath deep, you cant get any sleep, because the Aft3rmath is coming, so you better start running.

P3ace!!!

[SajN]

[SajN]

Some more comments please

[MoBrat]

sick stuff i like it..it looks like u worked hard on this keep up the good work

[SajN]

Tnx

I just wish I was better in english .

[MoBrat]

Tnx

I just wish I was better in english .

no problem....ur rhyme is straight foward i understand it completely