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My Micpass Part

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My Micpass Part

Postby Speech » Oct 20th, '06, 13:52

well i wrote a part on da micpassbeat but since i wasn' able to record i didn
make tha deadline.....i hope you like it.....written in like 15 minutes(while watchin a soap...lol)

K-Little, little part on da mic pass
weed cigarz takin him too far like tha white trash
bitches consider me as hard cuz i bite ash
plus i don see wack rappers with this eye rash
im da one laughin when i see ya ride crash
your body crackin and get hit cuz your bike dash
if ya manage to get up ya in a knife flash
got ya whole body swolen like your wife ass




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Postby Ethos » Oct 21st, '06, 17:52

nice i wrote one to. i'll try posting it as well. if coccoa will make a second one then you could probably be on it then.
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Postby rhiannon » Oct 21st, '06, 21:13

:laughing: at the last line....nice work i liked it..u shud deffo record it 4 the next mic pass thing
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Postby Speech » Oct 21st, '06, 22:35

aaite i should be able to record it till then....hope i make da next deadline....you ppl just let me know when it sposed to be ready

thx fo da feed...any1 else?
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Postby Infliction » Oct 24th, '06, 06:38

Hot verse i liked it. hook some feedback on mine if you got some free time
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Postby Speech » Oct 24th, '06, 14:49

plaspp wrote:Hot verse i liked it. hook some feedback on mine if you got some free time


aaight homeboy
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Postby C-Game » Oct 24th, '06, 19:01

nice :8)
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Postby Speech » Oct 27th, '06, 13:05

cgame wrote:nice :8)


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