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Postby Rae » Oct 24th, '06, 21:58

i deleted this ...

b/c i dont want anyone else 2 read it!


i g2g ... i'll talk 2 everyone in about Jan. or a little sooner ...

bye ...

i'll miss yall!

<3 rae
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Postby Rae » Oct 24th, '06, 22:04

Clarky wrote:Do you know Steve personally?


nah we just talk ALL tha time ...

and him and my bf added eachother on myspace ... etc ...

no offense ... i need feedback ... so will u tell me if it was alright?
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Oct 24th, '06, 22:12

its real deap and i guess fi thats what ya wanne say then tis fine tis really all down to you though no one else can tell you what to say or if its ok , ya know ?
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Postby Rae » Oct 24th, '06, 22:13

Bar wrote:its real deap and i guess fi thats what ya wanne say then tis fine tis really all down to you though no one else can tell you what to say or if its ok , ya know ?


yeah ... but i mean ... does it make sense and stuff ... i guess (he's really truthful and mean cridict when it comes to writin stuff ... which sucks)

thanx 4 tha feedback bar! :D
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Postby stevethetruth » Oct 25th, '06, 01:30

Clarky wrote:Do you know Steve personally?


lmao i wish she did :p
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Postby Rae » Nov 3rd, '06, 17:46

steverocks88 wrote:
Clarky wrote:Do you know Steve personally?


lmao i wish she did :p


lol i wish i did 2 .... b/c i wanna la la la lick ya 2 ya head 2 ya toes! i wanna ... etc ... :D
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Postby stevethetruth » Nov 3rd, '06, 17:47

Rae wrote:
steverocks88 wrote:
Clarky wrote:Do you know Steve personally?


lmao i wish she did :p


lol i wish i did 2 .... b/c i wanna la la la lick ya 2 ya head 2 ya toes! i wanna ... etc ... :D


ha ha :shifty: same here :shifty:
:D
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Postby Rae » Nov 3rd, '06, 17:49

steverocks88 wrote:
Rae wrote:
steverocks88 wrote:
Clarky wrote:Do you know Steve personally?


lmao i wish she did :p


lol i wish i did 2 .... b/c i wanna la la la lick ya 2 ya head 2 ya toes! i wanna ... etc ... :D


ha ha :shifty: same here :shifty:
:D


lmao i know i know ... but i wanna do more than lick u from ur head 2 ur toes ... i wanna ... well i cant say it on here ... hint hint :smoking: :smoking:
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Postby stevethetruth » Nov 3rd, '06, 17:53

Rae wrote:
steverocks88 wrote:
Rae wrote:
steverocks88 wrote:
Clarky wrote:Do you know Steve personally?


lmao i wish she did :p


lol i wish i did 2 .... b/c i wanna la la la lick ya 2 ya head 2 ya toes! i wanna ... etc ... :D


ha ha :shifty: same here :shifty:
:D


lmao i know i know ... but i wanna do more than lick u from ur head 2 ur toes ... i wanna ... well i cant say it on here ... hint hint :smoking: :smoking:



:shifty: :shifty: :shifty: :flower: :sweating: :smoking:
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Postby Rae » Nov 5th, '06, 23:41

steverocks88 wrote:
Rae wrote:
steverocks88 wrote:
Rae wrote:
steverocks88 wrote:
Clarky wrote:Do you know Steve personally?


lmao i wish she did :p


lol i wish i did 2 .... b/c i wanna la la la lick ya 2 ya head 2 ya toes! i wanna ... etc ... :D


ha ha :shifty: same here :shifty:
:D


lmao i know i know ... but i wanna do more than lick u from ur head 2 ur toes ... i wanna ... well i cant say it on here ... hint hint :smoking: :smoking:



:shifty: :shifty: :shifty: :flower: :sweating: :smoking:



lmao u know u like that! :smoking:
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