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Wack, Me?

Postby Kez » Oct 27th, '06, 14:47

It's Kez again, can't you motherfuckers get a hint?
I don't wanna hear if you think i'm wack as fuck, again a bint
Has decided to point me out well well done you fucking annoying cow
D'
you want a fucking medal? You're as fake as a toy without
A receipt, i dread the day that ever we fuckin, we meet
Cause i might want to smash your face in with my cleet feet
Just realise that i kick your ass without using a toe
Stop abusing my flow or i might just lose it and go
And start a lyrical attack that's more spiritual than wack
You fuckers keep doing this i won't be clinically intact
Shit, my stomach hurts for me rapping another bunch of fucking words
For people who won't even listen so it just pisses me off even more, and worse
Yeah, i make less sense than a fucking mormon verse
But i'm not a fake motherfucker like you, i don't say i'm always stormin' turf
From the little feedback i get and how much i produce, i just get more bored and irked
Tell me not to rap i'll fuck you up and just get fucking cautioned! (Er...)


[Chorus]
So i don't care what you say so just stop blabbing your mouth
You're not making any sense, tell me not to i just start battling now
Wouldn't it be better for you just to give it up?
Cause you won't stop me doing this so just pleae listen, fuck
I don't know what i did to you but i'll forever record my shit
I don't give a shit how you think i should sound, your life must be boring, it
Isn't satisfying you, you know you can't rap, see
But that's no excuse, who the fuck are you calling wack, me?

I used to change myself and change colours faster than a chameleon
At the drop of a hat i would try to not be wack, but still seein' it!
I understand now, it's just a matter of opinion
If one guy thinks i'm great, 20 think i'm wack and a minion
Of Satan sent to torture evil people's ears
You prolly think listening to me is a dare that Evil Kenievel fears!
Nobody even wants to hear me, should i rip out my spine and show ya?
Get on the news then survive the coma, put my CD in a store, then get signed and soldier
Onto every music channel that's playing in Stoke
Till i'm famous enough that i'm forever waiting in smoke?
Being able to have my own fucking weight in rich coke
And have everywhere from MTV to the old folks home playing it, whoa!
Okay, snap out of it that was bullshit and wow, was it!
You think i'm wacker than Vanilla Ice and whiter than the whitest that powder is!
But for me to stop rapping would be an act of wack cowardice
So even if i get hate mail daily, i'll always rap proud of it!

[Chorus]
So i don't care what you say so just stop blabbing your mouth
You're not making any sense, tell me not to i just start battling now
Wouldn't it be better for you just to give it up?
Cause you won't stop me doing this so just pleae listen, fuck
I don't know what i did to you but i'll forever record my shit
I don't give a shit how you think i should sound, your life must be boring, it
Isn't satisfying you, you know you can't rap, see
But that's no excuse, who the fuck are you calling wack, me?

Somebody give me praise instead of all this shit and hate
This isn't fakeness or a cry for attention, this is rage
Why should i give a fuck whether or not you hate my rap
My age might clap over the lyrics but i still make like half
Of rappers i know tremble because my lyrics aren't wack and are so fresh all
The words i record shit them up, but they just don't like to accept i'm so better!
This is the problem people just hate me since i'm great
You're just biased at me because i'm different, well bitch i hate
Being treated like this, i don't bite i'm just real as i spit
Trying to make sense to you is like threading a needle blind, bitch!
It can never happen but just know that whether rappin
Or posting on this forum, i don't care if you reckon i'm wack an
Shouldn't even bother, that just makes me do it more
So don't attempt to stop me, because it's just useless, whore
I'm coming back with rhymes you never heard or knew before
I focus so hard on trying to write a good enough rhyme for you with my pen that i chew it raw!

[Chorus]
So i don't care what you say so just stop blabbing your mouth
You're not making any sense, tell me not to i just start battling now
Wouldn't it be better for you just to give it up?
Cause you won't stop me doing this so just pleae listen, fuck
I don't know what i did to you but i'll forever record my shit
I don't give a shit how you think i should sound, your life must be boring, it
Isn't satisfying you, you know you can't rap, see
But that's no excuse, who the fuck are you calling wack, me?
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Postby C-Game » Oct 27th, '06, 17:39

nice lines kez
and multis
flow goes on and off
but it cld be manipulated in the way u say it
is an audio comin ?
nice stuff :worship:
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Postby Kez » Oct 27th, '06, 18:43

cgame wrote:nice lines kez
and multis
flow goes on and off
but it cld be manipulated in the way u say it
is an audio comin ?
nice stuff :worship:


Thanks
I might do audio, i might just get called a chick again though.
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Oct 27th, '06, 18:55

audio be nice man i like it kool shit :smoking:
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Postby Marth » Oct 27th, '06, 20:04

Good verses men, rhymes are to awesome
you want a beat for it, maybe can create one for ya
The world has gone crazy like eminem on kim
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