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what if (full with first verse)and chorus

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what if (full with first verse)and chorus

Postby stevethetruth » Oct 28th, '06, 01:56

Verse 1:
What if I were to put a gun to my head and end it today
Yeah It was a hell of a run but the depression got in the way
End it all that quickly cause to me my life
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Postby Inzanity » Oct 28th, '06, 03:03

that was really good my favorite lines are

"What if I were to put a gun to my head and end it today
Yeah It was a hell of a run but the depression got in the way"

"would they admit that they
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Postby stevethetruth » Oct 28th, '06, 03:34

EmptyPromises wrote:that was really good my favorite lines are

"What if I were to put a gun to my head and end it today
Yeah It was a hell of a run but the depression got in the way"

"would they admit that they
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