Some More Practice

[Kez]

Teach you a lesson with a chair in your hide
Break into HMV, steal shit, get trapped and buried inside
I gotta stop being so depressing and start cherishing life
I don't give you looks, so just stop staring at i
I try to lay low but am unfairly revived
Think of a perfect rhyme to put here, but there isn't time!
You can moan about it, say you couldn't even bear it for five
Minutes cause i don't really fuckin' care what you like!
I go blue in the face from fuckin' suffocation
Trying too hard to rap, trying to please the fuckin' haters
So it gets to the point where i just can't be arsed anymore
Maybe i should give up rap and get revenge as an arsonist whore!
I told you that i'd rap no matter what you thought of me
Being polite and submissive is what i was always taught to be!
Your mind's so fragile, we bang on it and shout let us in!
The worst part is that as soon as you read this you'll forget again!

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Feed please, particularly on flow and structure. Trying to improve it.

[Marth]

good shit, good lines, good rhymes
:worship:

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

you getting hang of structure and shit keep it up man