another verse (plz give feed back)

[2 DeeP]

you cant talk to me cos im real
dont fuck with deep cos he the real deal
am not goin to respond im just goin to eat my meal
we get drunk at the week end,
homi thats always been a hood trend,
get all my drinks mixed in thats a good blend
all types a wines all types a beers,
put up your classes id like to say a cheers,
this is to ower new careers,
we all making money but thats rap,
we all gangsters heer this aint no rats map,
thers no way back thes no butten that says stop this,
home boy shut the fuck up this aint no pop quiz,
i no you heard about uwc,
if you aint have yoo been hiden under a tree,
wen we say wer on top you betta agree,

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

you cant talk to me cos im real
dont fuck with deep cos he the real deal
am not goin to respond im just goin to eat my meal
we get drunk at the week end,
homi thats always been a hood trend,
get all my drinks mixed in thats a good blend
all types a wines all types a beers,
put up your classes id like to say a cheers,
this is to ower new careers,
we all making money but thats rap,
we all gangsters heer this aint no rats map,
thers no way back thes no butten that says stop this,
home boy shut the fuck up this aint no pop quiz,
i no you heard about uwc,
if you aint have yoo been hiden under a tree,
wen we say wer on top you betta agree,

nice man yer getting eh hang oh dis shit

[Kez]

you cant talk to me cos im real
dont fuck with deep cos he the real deal
am not goin to respond im just goin to eat my meal
we get drunk at the week end,
homi thats always been a hood trend,
get all my drinks mixed in thats a good blend
all types a wines all types a beers,
put up your classes id like to say a cheers,
this is to ower new careers,
we all making money but thats rap,
we all gangsters heer this aint no rats map,
thers no way back thes no butten that says stop this,
home boy shut the fuck up this aint no pop quiz,
i no you heard about uwc,
if you aint have yoo been hiden under a tree,
wen we say wer on top you betta agree,

Liking the multis you used. Nice.

[2 DeeP]

feed plz good or bad