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Just a verse

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Just a verse

Postby Kez » Nov 2nd, '06, 18:46

Trying to escape me is like not listening to a judge
You run out the court, dodge an 18 wheeler and get hit with a bus!
The sick thoughts i think could give you mental AIDS
Ima unscrew my ears and put it in a kids head, then let him play!
After an hour with no brain ima think "my brain hurts!"
Then go back to the kid, find he died, find his girlfriend and take hers'!
Cause any rapper that thinks he can write better
Is gonna find himself shitting himself when he finds nine letters
Coming through his doorway, slashed by knives? Never!
Those are slits that my steel tongue carved, tell your wife you gonna die Heather!
I'm so criminally i should be either dead or in jail
I got haunted by activists for severing whales!
I'm sure that you just rap knowing you suck!
Get in an elevator with you, i start to attack, throwing you up!
You're so blind to how much you suck that you tried to reverse
You were prolly busy straining for a one word rhyme while writin' a verse!

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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Nov 2nd, '06, 19:12

man you improving with flow nice man , time to try different styles and shit you getting great man keep it up
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Postby shady_50_for life_420 » Nov 2nd, '06, 19:15

not bad not bad at all :worship:
r.i.p. proof, tupac, notorious b.i.g., you will always be remembered!!
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Postby C-Game » Nov 2nd, '06, 20:02

nice stuff kez
i like that style
really catchy
need to battle u after the tourney coz u got it bro
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