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Postby Marth » Nov 3rd, '06, 09:27

i made this one, because I never get respect, on school or on basketball, because i wear skate cloths and because i like hip hop music, and i'm a rap batler, so leave feedback please, and btw if you think this shit is stolen... It isn't, it's maybe possible that another rapper wrote same lines, but treully i don't bite shit anymore till my first bite :P first time was last time

Yo yo, respect guys respect
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Postby C-Game » Nov 3rd, '06, 16:52

yo u just got RESPECT from me for that verse
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need some multis man
the structure cld be improvised a lil
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Postby Marth » Nov 3rd, '06, 17:01

I'll try to work on it
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Nov 3rd, '06, 19:43

aint even gonni read ti coz you lying before you start it

first time was last time


in your first stuff you bit lines from....biggie and eminem.....you took the liens out in a edit so i cant show them...but i talked to you about it on msn i remember

you bti lines in the battle with thomas from eminem

you bit lines in another battle witch i will find....i count 3 times
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Postby Marth » Nov 3rd, '06, 21:49

that from eminem is bullshit was just bad luck we had same rhymes
i thought it maself

from masta ace, somebody said he had good lines and wanted me to put them in a batle, i thought he made them originaly but he stole them
sorry about that

maybe confusing but i really don't wanna bite
just end of case, and give feed for ma lirycs aight
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Nov 4th, '06, 00:50

Marth wrote:that from eminem is bullshit was just bad luck we had same rhymes
i thought it maself

from masta ace, somebody said he had good lines and wanted me to put them in a batle, i thought he made them originaly but he stole them
sorry about that

maybe confusing but i really don't wanna bite
just end of case, and give feed for ma lirycs aight


so ok first its just BAD LUCK that you bit lines from a song that had been made like 4 years before you made your line, BULLSHIT!!


second one just read your explination its, BULLSHIT!!!!!!!!


you just a bullshit rapper who dont know anything bout rapping go give feed on my new track fucking moron
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Postby SenatorN » Nov 4th, '06, 00:52

Good shit!
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Postby 2 DeeP » Nov 4th, '06, 14:06

yea its ok but yoor flow is shit man :whistle: the rest is good tho
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Postby Marth » Nov 4th, '06, 15:02

Depends on how you speak it
first verse need work i know, it was a compression of old rhymes 'n shit
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Postby 2 DeeP » Nov 4th, '06, 15:11

Marth wrote:Depends on how you speak it
first verse need work i know, it was a compression of old rhymes 'n shit
yoo makin an oudio :smoking:
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Postby Marth » Nov 4th, '06, 15:30

can take time ;p
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