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Random angry verse

Postby Kez » Nov 16th, '06, 20:34

Pushed, now when we meet there'll be no witnesses
If you don't witness this you'll so wish ya did
Cause the soul isn't hit but your nose, bitch'll split
Your throat, it is slit and nobody notices bitch
Tie you to the fucking railway but you won't untie the ropes
Fuck i'd elope with a man if it'd get you cut right wit hopes
Of surviving diminished to it's half a percent
I heard what the bastard has said so he gonna get his lips chapped up again
When he locked in the freezer thirsty as fuck
Dirty wit muck there till he's thirty or up
Pull you out torture you like they torture Saddam
Ima put you in a car and torch you'n the van!
Sick depraved acts and yeah, we made that
Gash on his skull, we just suck at stitching his brain back!
Hire an assassin to get you, kill him and get you drowned in the pond
You the fuckin' king of survival, except your crown isn't on!

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Just a quick verse thing
Not serious
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Postby C-Game » Nov 16th, '06, 20:46

Hire an assassin to get you, kill him and get you drowned in the pond
You the fuckin' king of survival, except your crown isn't on!


nice
kool stuff man
keep it up
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Re: Random angry verse

Postby Big-T » Nov 18th, '06, 15:37

yeahh nice angry verse

i particularly like da lines:
Kez wrote:Cause the soul isn't hit but your nose, bitch'll split
Your throat, it is slit and nobody notices bitch


peace
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Postby Inches » Nov 18th, '06, 22:29

mines better
:smoking:
lol j/p j/p
your improvin mann
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