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Dope Anthem

Postby Infliction » Nov 22nd, '06, 19:24

This started off as a freestyle, but I liked where I was going and I wrote it down. Enjoy, Feedback please

EDIT: It goes to the Purple Pills instrumental.

Roll dat weed and smoke it, bitch
Puff that hash dont choke on it
Chop that coke and snort that shit
Chop that rock and take a hit
Melt that acid on your tongue
Put your cock in the bitches bum
Shoot that smack until you numb
Put it in her mouth and shoot that cum
Pop that mesk until you stutter
Eat those shrooms like they were butter
Steal a litre of cough syrup from your mother
Robo-trip till you feel smothered
Mornin' glory gives you more stories
Want some abscinth? Here's a 40
Sniff some butane till you horny
Dont O.D on Peyote
Too much opium makes you sorry, you were born
But it makes you mellow, like creamed corn
Take some Ibogaine, feel no pain
I just puked on the carpet, now it's stained
I feel sick, you know what i'm sayin'?
I need more dope, helps me cope
Makes my tummy feel all better
I'm gettin' hungry, food's so yummy
I'm gettin some ketamine, anyone want some?
(That's for my cat!) Man, fuck yo cat!
I want somethin' to make me blind, like a bat
Oh shit, I just snorted poison for yo rats!
Man fuck that shit I'm gonna die anyway
Hook some nexus, homie check this
Its almost like ex but its a little bit different
Comes in crystals, hold my pistol
Lemme get it out my pocket, watchu doin' why'd you cock that?
Get it out my face, I'm tryna free base
I'm trippin' out, this shit is laced
(Dont take that speed!) Man, too late
Ephedrine got me severin', one of my toes
I feel so hot, I gotta take off my clothes
PCP, I cant see! I'm goin blind, I gotta smoke some more weed
Blood's pouring down my face, my ears started to bleed
Must be from the chronic, probly got a bad seed
I wanna sleep, gimme some nytol
(Man, good call) Fuck you man! I want the whole bottle!
Fentanyl will make you ill, pass the tylenol I want more pills
Man where's my gun? OH SHIT SON! (Gunshot)
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Postby Tomega » Nov 22nd, '06, 19:27

Funny shit man
props
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Postby Kez » Nov 22nd, '06, 19:28

Tomega wrote:Funny shit man
props
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Postby C-Game » Nov 22nd, '06, 21:26

Must be from the chronic, probly got a bad seed
I wanna sleep, gimme some nytol
(Man, good call) Fuck you man! I want the whole bottle!
Fentanyl will make you ill, pass the tylenol I want more pills
Man where's my gun? OH SHIT SON! (Gunshot)

nice endin man
great stuff by u again
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Postby Rae » Nov 22nd, '06, 22:13

wow that shit is crazy!!!

propz! :D
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Postby Infliction » Nov 23rd, '06, 16:47

thanks for hte feedbakc all :) more more more ! :D
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Postby polluted » Nov 27th, '06, 03:42

I like the beginnin....pretty constructive....the ending was less "rhymy" but good shit man...

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Postby Infliction » Nov 27th, '06, 05:33

thanks man
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