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Postby stevethetruth » Nov 23rd, '06, 05:46

i saw you in them tight jeans
your body looking lean and mean
a beautiful ass like i've never seen
me reacting like a crazy sex machine
hoping you would sit next to me
it might not happen but a guy can dream
a dude can dream pretty damn far
from talking to you then fucking in a car
to drinking with his buds meteting you in a bar
next thing you know your taking off your bra
me getting hard screaming oh MY GOD
you moaning with desire and nod
five seconds later oh shit I
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Postby stevethetruth » Nov 24th, '06, 03:56

lmao no responds lol that's cool i guess
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Postby Coccoa » Nov 24th, '06, 04:36

That was an eliminative move (similar to a knockout right hook) towards any artial parts of lyricism or verbalism.
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Postby stevethetruth » Nov 24th, '06, 04:40

Coccoa wrote:That was an eliminative move (similar to a knockout right hook) towards any artial parts of lyricism or verbalism.



huh :confusion:
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Postby stevethetruth » Nov 24th, '06, 04:41

Blackheart wrote:I think it's real good,

nice job man.



lol thanks man :D
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Postby Coccoa » Nov 24th, '06, 04:49

steverocks88 wrote:
Coccoa wrote:That was an eliminative move (similar to a knockout right hook) towards any artial parts of lyricism or verbalism.



huh :confusion:


I know, i got that effect on people. Tho u aint playing no game with a bitch if you aint catch a lil bit of wordplay ese. You aint got the player style maybe. I dunno.
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Postby stevethetruth » Nov 24th, '06, 05:00

Coccoa wrote:
steverocks88 wrote:
Coccoa wrote:That was an eliminative move (similar to a knockout right hook) towards any artial parts of lyricism or verbalism.



huh :confusion:


I know, i got that effect on people. Tho u aint playing no game with a bitch if you aint catch a lil bit of wordplay ese. You aint got the player style maybe. I dunno.


naw i was just bored lol i ould never write a full song and record with that type of style hell no lol
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Postby Rae » Nov 24th, '06, 23:47

damn! i liked it! :D

it had good flow ... good rhymes ... good everything :D

keep it up :D
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Postby C-Game » Nov 25th, '06, 18:31

steverocks88 wrote:
Coccoa wrote:That was an eliminative move (similar to a knockout right hook) towards any artial parts of lyricism or verbalism.



huh :confusion:


he he

nice stuff
so whos the gal ur thinkin abt wen u wrote this
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Postby stevethetruth » Nov 25th, '06, 19:24

cgame wrote:
steverocks88 wrote:
Coccoa wrote:That was an eliminative move (similar to a knockout right hook) towards any artial parts of lyricism or verbalism.



huh :confusion:


he he

nice stuff
so whos the gal ur thinkin abt wen u wrote this



noone i was just bored lol
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Postby C-Game » Nov 25th, '06, 19:29

steverocks88 wrote:
cgame wrote:
steverocks88 wrote:
Coccoa wrote:That was an eliminative move (similar to a knockout right hook) towards any artial parts of lyricism or verbalism.



huh :confusion:


he he

nice stuff
so whos the gal ur thinkin abt wen u wrote this



noone i was just bored lol


hmmm
oki ssssshhh!!!


















gimme the name of the porno
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sssh!!!!!!
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