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My Drunk Freestyle :)

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Is It A Good Or Bad Drunk Freestyle

Poll ended at Dec 23rd, '06, 13:32

Yes It's Good
2
100%
No U Suck
0
No votes
Its Okay
0
No votes
 
Total votes : 2

My Drunk Freestyle :)

Postby MoBrat » Nov 23rd, '06, 13:29

they say my song needs a multi like my rhymes are faulty at least my rhymes aren't bitten there 100% written so many hours wasted now its copyed n pasted dont like the worlds rotation hit frustration so i write outta desperation tryed 2 force the chorus heres a thesaurus u need it 2 make what u spit more complex claiming 2 break necks with ur boy specs work on ur reflex so it detects ur defects u dont know how many ppl ur shit affects in some respects they look at u like a hero but ur more like sub-zero from mortal combat this is Mo Brat trying 2 get at Kani leave u lookin like my uncle ronnie with a name like that who do u think u are the pimp of the day nope not today with the way i speak everyone luv's my unique technique sneek up n smash u like an antique ur so weak she call's me a geek cause i edit i'll give her some credit cause im a freak ur lucky this shits a leak so u can take a peek at how i play hide n go seek so i'll switch my style while in the middle of a hostile freestyle its only a trial but i saved a back up file so put on ur fake little smile that kid kyle still wants 2 jump u but who wouldn't we shouldn't feel this way they took a survey and they say i could slay u in a battle get halfbreed from seattle 2 make fun of u and ur rattle he'll find something 2 teach probably about ur speech and how u preach like cheech & chong show u how 2 smoke a bong and make ur long song strong instead of wrong

Its not bad 4 a drunk freestyle but what yall think???
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Postby Inzanity » Nov 23rd, '06, 14:56

that's good for a freestyle especially for a drunk one lol nice job man
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Postby MoBrat » Nov 23rd, '06, 15:00

lol well thank u i seem 2 write better when im drunk cause my mind just goes with the flow :D
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Postby C-Game » Nov 23rd, '06, 16:53

ha ha
i saw it man
nice stuff
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