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Postby Coccoa » Nov 24th, '06, 04:48

Check it out next time u wanna play a girl out, do it by the book

Dont front on me unless you nine or dime
I aint loving you, laaady stay out my grind
Alright? Im here for a night, you should come tonight
Right? You aint waiting in no line
Cuz you fine and on the bed you know how to please
With ease, bumpin and shakin ur double deez
Oh please, shake it, do it, come through and hey
You know the Syndicate dont play

Wow, cant believe what im seeing in the streets
Real talk, dark skin, real tall, my thing
See i feel how you make me feel, but dont play me
The kid got the game, you gotta come today
Shorty, you gotta come tonight, you owe me
A night of passion in my next-to-sea mansion
Somebody said i love you, dont believe that shit
Im only here to get you, sex you, and i left you
Hell, if i wasnt a mac you'd prolly plot
How to use, confuse my brain, turn me to a slave
Well, i aint fronting but it takes a bit more
You aint gonna use me like the neighborhood hoe
Huh, i got game you know this, now you notice
Half of the men who court you, they straight phonies
I aint scheming on anyone, i doing my thang
C.O.A. the name, Syndicate the gang

Dont front on me unless you nine or dime
I aint loving you, laaady stay out my grind
Alright? Im here for a night, you should come tonight
Right? You aint waiting in no line
Cuz you fine and on the bed you know how to please
With ease, bumpin and shakin ur double deez
Oh please, shake it, do it, come through and hey
You know the Syndicate dont play

Yeah we went to bed, why you make a big deal bout it
Sex is a drink before and a cigar right after
I dont know what you like more, my chain or me?
I guess its me cuz i brought you to extacy
Its real, diamonds satisfying but they aint like me
Cuz all the money of the world cant buy a man like me
If you remember, i stood for you
The jabs and the hits that i took for you, true
You didnt ask for that
But i did it for you, so better stop the nagging, relax, know what?
Im gonna be around the block, watching you
With some other corny idiot you going out with
I aint hating on ya boy, but i cant see
Who he is, where he coming from, who roll with
His life is on the line, he better be gone
Imma address this little issue on the very next song

Dont front on me unless you nine or dime
I aint loving you, laaady stay out my grind
Alright? Im here for a night, you should come tonight
Right? You aint waiting in no line
Cuz you fine and on the bed you know how to please
With ease, bumpin and shakin ur double deez
Oh please, shake it, do it, come through and hey
You know the Syndicate dont play

Now kid, thats the way to do it. Comprende?
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Postby stevethetruth » Nov 24th, '06, 04:54

so the way to do it is take some pre written lyrics, copy and paste them, and give the topic a contorverisal name

wow pure genious, boy i wish i was as smart as you
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Postby Coccoa » Nov 24th, '06, 04:55

:unsure:

I didnt bite those lyrics....i wrote them. Wtf u talking about.
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Postby stevethetruth » Nov 24th, '06, 05:01

Coccoa wrote::unsure:

I didnt bite those lyrics....i wrote them. Wtf u talking about.


no offense but read above what i said before slowly and you'll see i never said you bit anyone lol


oh and btw nice lyrics lol
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Postby Coccoa » Nov 24th, '06, 05:07

Ah...prewritten...not so prewritten, i finished them early morning today. And yeah the controversial title makes everything. How else would Steve know?
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Postby stevethetruth » Nov 24th, '06, 05:10

Coccoa wrote:Ah...prewritten...not so prewritten, i finished them early morning today. And yeah the controversial title makes everything. How else would Steve know?


smartass :laughing:
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Postby ThomasAguanis » Nov 24th, '06, 05:11

:laughing: i didn't read any of it but you always have to start shit don't you?
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Postby Coccoa » Nov 24th, '06, 05:14

Gee, u know me....i am C.O.A. aka Haaalum aka Mr. I Dont Feed A Bitch aka Mac aka More Pimpin Than Snoop Dunn aka ME.
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Postby ThomasAguanis » Nov 24th, '06, 05:32

Coccoa wrote:Gee, u know me....i am C.O.A. aka Haaalum aka Mr. I Dont Feed A Bitch aka Mac aka More Pimpin Than Snoop Dunn aka ME.

aka g-unit groupie aka shit starter aka normally starts with people below him :whistle:
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Postby Coccoa » Nov 24th, '06, 05:41

ThomasAguanis wrote:
Coccoa wrote:Gee, u know me....i am C.O.A. aka Haaalum aka Mr. I Dont Feed A Bitch aka Mac aka More Pimpin Than Snoop Dunn aka ME.

aka g-unit groupie aka shit starter aka normally starts with people below him :whistle:


Aka I-Do-In-One-Week-What-Yall-Do-In-One-Decade aka WITHOUT ME YOU'D BE TEXT RAPPERS aka I ethered two clowns aka It wasnt me with the pink thunderstorm behind me :angry: :angry: :angry: happy now? :angry: :angry:

Who is pioneering here 24/7?? Who brought audio to y'all?? Who did the Bloodline?? Who is making a TRshady Radio with 24/7 music YOUR music, not what Hot 97 spins everyday.

Dont get me started. Im full of ideas but none of yall cooperate enuff.
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Postby polluted » Nov 24th, '06, 08:08

Coccoa wrote:
ThomasAguanis wrote:
Coccoa wrote:Gee, u know me....i am C.O.A. aka Haaalum aka Mr. I Dont Feed A Bitch aka Mac aka More Pimpin Than Snoop Dunn aka ME.

aka g-unit groupie aka shit starter aka normally starts with people below him :whistle:


Aka I-Do-In-One-Week-What-Yall-Do-In-One-Decade aka WITHOUT ME YOU'D BE TEXT RAPPERS aka I ethered two clowns aka It wasnt me with the pink thunderstorm behind me :angry: :angry: :angry: happy now? :angry: :angry:

Who is pioneering here 24/7?? Who brought audio to y'all?? Who did the Bloodline?? Who is making a TRshady Radio with 24/7 music YOUR music, not what Hot 97 spins everyday.

Dont get me started. Im full of ideas but none of yall cooperate enuff.


ur faggit.....bitch....
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Postby Infliction » Nov 24th, '06, 08:26

You cant claim you brought audio here just because you were the first one to do audio.. thats equivilent to the first guy to ever jerk off saying hes responsible for the rest of the world doing it for all of eternity, no, we did it because it was there. not because you did it first.
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Postby stevethetruth » Nov 24th, '06, 16:16

well first off coccoa you never helped me in my music i helped myself there were a few that really helped me but i won't say there names
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Postby Coccoa » Nov 24th, '06, 19:30

plaspp wrote:You cant claim you brought audio here just because you were the first one to do audio.. thats equivilent to the first guy to ever jerk off saying hes responsible for the rest of the world doing it for all of eternity, no, we did it because it was there. not because you did it first.


Jerking off and soundforging are equivalents now??
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