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Postby Kez » Nov 24th, '06, 20:36

Brought up in rap, when i saw little chavs
With their hoods up in a phonebooth snorting up crack!
The best of this and the best at that
UWC is on the list with me, but the rest're just wack!
Soon you gon be playing my debut on Radio Stoke
Sorry Timberlake, i aint mean to be takin' your hope
But compared to me Sexyback is like playing with smoke
You shouldn't do it, or you'll get burned, you babyish bloke!
If you hate this song you don't have to tell me
And use your front of helpful crit, saying you bastards help me
Give me a break, i'd rather just attack ya while these
Other idiots suddenly do a runner and crap their white sheets
This very well may be the worst song i've ever rapped to
But still i have to rap it and make this track too
Because God i love it, you cannot knock or shove it
So you best to just accept it you fuckin cocks, oh fuck it!
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Postby C-Game » Nov 24th, '06, 20:45

Soon you gon be playing my debut on Radio Stoke
Sorry Timberlake, i aint mean to be takin' your hope
But compared to me Sexyback is like playing with smoke
You shouldn't do it, or you'll get burned, you babyish bloke!


nice man
keep it up
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Postby Rae » Nov 24th, '06, 23:25

yeah it was ok!

keep it up

practice makes perfect! :D
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Nov 25th, '06, 17:53

its was nice but you done alot better
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