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Starting to Understand

Postby Rae » Nov 27th, '06, 22:59

Its funny how u just get to meet someone,
And it feels like you there the only one for you,
This sounds a lot like D骠 vu,
To me- becuz see this isn\'t the first time its happened to me,
But I love the excitement of thinking about what it could end up to be,
In the end- a lover or just a great friend,
You never know till you take the chance,
And stop thinking every guy is trying to get in your pants,
But when you get to thinking its much more than that,
It a man that cares about you,
And wants to show you just that,
Its him showing you ways he loves you with his hands and his mouth,
With ways in which you\'ve always had great dout,
But im starting to understand what it all means,
It means there is gonna be a guy that really cares for me.



ehh i was just kinda bored ... and i was thinkin about some1 that i like ... and this is what i came up with ... its nothin great ... it only took me about 4 minutes lol ... :D
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Postby Coccoa » Nov 27th, '06, 23:17

Ummmmmmm.....niiiiiiiice :8)
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Postby stevethetruth » Nov 28th, '06, 03:17

nice :D reminds me of someone lol

but yeah good job your getting better ;)
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Postby Rae » Nov 28th, '06, 13:07

Coccoa-lol whats tha\"ummmmmmmmmm\" for lol ?? :D

steve-ehhh well i really didnt try hard on it ... it coulda been alot betta!
but thanx :D
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Postby C-Game » Nov 28th, '06, 17:36

steverocks88 wrote:nice :D reminds me of someone lol

but yeah good job your getting better ;)


* oh shit cocoas here steves here
* hope that poem is abt me...
he he

hey any way nice stuff rae
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Postby stevethetruth » Nov 28th, '06, 18:15

^^^ :laughing:
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Postby Coccoa » Nov 28th, '06, 19:05

I wonder why people got death wishes today

*resolves to e-violence*
*reinacts Snoop on vato*
*kills, kills, kills*

Vato you wont believe what i saw
I saw this pack of guys and they act real hard
They twist their fingers say "you know who we are?"
He said "i dont give a fuck i'm Cee C.O.A."

Pow....run nigga run nigga
Pow....run motherfucker run
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Postby Rae » Nov 28th, '06, 20:55

thanx every1 :D
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Postby C-Game » Nov 28th, '06, 21:30

Coccoa wrote:I wonder why people got death wishes today

*resolves to e-violence*
*reinacts Snoop on vato*
*kills, kills, kills*

Vato you wont believe what i saw
I saw this pack of guys and they act real hard
They twist their fingers say "you know who we are?"
He said "i dont give a fuck i'm Cee C.O.A."

Pow....run ***** run *****
Pow....run motherfucker run


it wasnt me it was steves fault :shifty:

* o shit steve has a gun toooo
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Postby Rae » Nov 28th, '06, 21:42

hahaha ok now stop this stuff ... :D
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Postby shady_babii3 » Nov 28th, '06, 22:06

congrats that was awesome!
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Postby Rae » Nov 28th, '06, 22:09

shady_babii3 wrote:congrats that was awesome!



thanx! :D
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Postby Enimee » Nov 29th, '06, 03:00

not half bad, sounds like you got some good thoughts...nice way to get them out


Keep it up :worship: :worship: :worship:
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Postby Rae » Nov 29th, '06, 03:01

Enimee wrote:not half bad, sounds like you got some good thoughts...nice way to get them out


Keep it up :worship: :worship: :worship:


thanx ... ehhh i can do alot betta tho ... :D
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Postby Enimee » Nov 29th, '06, 03:06

THen dooo iiiiit :tounge2:
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