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Postby Kez » Nov 28th, '06, 19:28

Yeah i use multies
Get to choose royalties, when i'm too faulty it's
Really annoying fear me bitch royally
Got thirty royalties you just a burly boy who sees
An idiot when he looks at me, you choose to be
So obsessed with me, as though you drooling at me!
Yeah i make myself look like a dick
But ima keep coming back like a shoe slides in shit
Giant brain of words, expanding with silence, pain it hurts
You can't get rid of me, you try to file it away it's worse!
Cause i linger like a bad smell
Pissing you all off like me when i find out my CD can't sell!
Idiots shut up before i rap of you
And you can gang up on me and have me smacked, but truth
Will still be in this recording to which i tapped a boot
In the recording studio got a question? Bastard, shoot!

[Chorus]
You suck ass stop rapping man you're just bad
Shove that notebook up your ass, me stop? Fuck that!
No need to talk smut man, just cause you outta luck and-
Stop right there, me not talk smut? Fuck that!
We're only giving you feedback, no need to chuck back!
This aint critique, it's insults, me take it? Fuck that!
You're the kind of idiots at hockey games we throw the pucks at!
Would you dare? What you mean back off? Fuck that!

Return to rap after being burned as bad as my burning track
-suit bottoms cause i was labelled as a chav? Can't you interpret chavs?!
A game that's full of bastards who just bitch man
Causing wounds that you couldn't stitch back!
The only way to fight back is just to bite back
You telling me i should stop if one guy says i'm wack?
Yeah i'd like to just to shut the guy's trap
But to do that i'd be letting them win, and i'm not like that!
These little bitches will shout it
I can envision him now as shouting it from the biggest big town that's
Packed with reporters and cameras alike
Which just means more evidence when i slam him with a bike!
And ima rap what i wish i could do to these gits who are
Constantly telling me how "this won't get you far"
But instead of telling me what to do, they just bitch, ooh ahh!
How clever, fuck you, go and get slit through cars!

[Chorus]
You suck ass stop rapping man you're just bad
Shove that notebook up your ass, me stop? Fuck that!
No need to talk smut man, just cause you outta luck and-
Stop right there, me not talk smut? Fuck that!
We're only giving you feedback, no need to chuck back!
This aint critique, it's insults, me take it? Fuck that!
You're the kind of idiots at hockey games we throw the pucks at!
Would you dare? What you mean back off? Fuck that!

Before you decide to be a flaming bastard
I'd much rather you go outside and play in traffic
You agesist ass shits can't face you're wack bitch
You just put me down due to my voice, it's gay and just sad it's
Amazing you couldn't think of any other thing to say
I wish to block your noise you should get smothered in the hay!
And don't try to tell me that your fucking mother isn't gay
I know that you're not really sure, that you're just in disarray
You jip me? I look at then throw your sucky shit away
Your shit is such fucking rubbish the dustbin isn't safe!
Typical shit about how hard i am
Now smart i rap and have you outsmarted man
That's why you think i'm shit, you slink by with
Your pitiful insults that don't mean shit, better tick my list
Yet another idiot who thinks that he's better than me
Ima go down in history so the future veterans see!

[Chorus]
You suck ass stop rapping man you're just bad
Shove that notebook up your ass, me stop? Fuck that!
No need to talk smut man, just cause you outta luck and-
Stop right there, me not talk smut? Fuck that!
We're only giving you feedback, no need to chuck back!
This aint critique, it's insults, me take it? Fuck that!
You're the kind of idiots at hockey games we throw the pucks at!
Would you dare? What you mean back off? Fuck that!
Last edited by Kez on Nov 29th, '06, 22:09, edited 1 time in total.
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Postby Coccoa » Nov 28th, '06, 19:45

So far u posted two song lyrics and both titles contain "fuck" in it.
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Postby Kez » Nov 28th, '06, 19:46

Coccoa wrote:So far u posted two song lyrics and both titles contain "fuck" in it.


Very observant and off-topic of you.
You got a point? Or you just set to make all my threads look shit?
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Postby Tomega » Nov 28th, '06, 20:04

Kez wrote:
Coccoa wrote:So far u posted two song lyrics and both titles contain "fuck" in it.


Very observant and off-topic of you.
You got a point? Or you just set to make all my threads look shit?


he can read since a day or two, let him be proud of it
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Nov 28th, '06, 20:13

goos stuff man...audio it
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Postby C-Game » Nov 28th, '06, 20:19

ill review it 2mo man
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