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Just a few of the lines ive been writin

Postby Jdogg06 » Nov 29th, '06, 01:32

get out my face u better chill cuz u dont no me and u never will

what u see is what u get take it or leave it

cuz im tired of fuckin around getin brought up just to be shut down

people playin with my mind like it was a game but the shit is about to change

i woke up today with a new game plan every things gotta change man no bullshit about it im gonna make it go ahead and doubt it

cuz its for my benefit im gonna make it and thats the end of it

i no im gonna make it rappin but i gotta set up how its gonna happen

cuz its incomplete i gotta fill in the lines so i can kill the rhymes

do what i do make a preview for fun then get it done time to debut at number 1

and u dont wanna mess with j cuz i dont wanna put a murder in my resamay i pledge today im gonna make it tommrow im gonna do the impossible like ray charles i aint blind but im gonna go from behind to ahead

i no i got a crazy flow i dont need to tell u cuz i already no

so im just tryin to get my point across the chain if u aint with me at aint a loss its a gain

when i do make it best belive theres gonna be alot of rubbin in im gonna be talkin shit when ur with ur bitch cuddlin im gonna be holdin my award askin whud u win no im not studderin

ull go down in history as a bitch to me puttin me through pain and misery
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Postby Rae » Nov 29th, '06, 01:44

thats good!

j/w when did u start rappin?

ur pretty good!

keep it up! ima tell u what every1 tells me "practice makes perfect!"

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Postby Jdogg06 » Nov 29th, '06, 01:53

thanks..

well ive been just rhymin in my head for a little and now im start to write it down cuz i thought they might be alright
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Postby Rae » Nov 29th, '06, 02:01

oh well its good shit u got there!

make sure u keep postin ur stuff! ;)
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Postby Jdogg06 » Nov 29th, '06, 02:02

thanks and i will
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