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Postby stevethetruth » Dec 1st, '06, 06:02

Ayo,
uh, uh
you aint the truth bitch
your a wack as rapper
hahah

aiight look

u a bitch thats why they call u the truth
u take more shots to your face then a photo booth
u aint good at rappin dawg u shood give in aha
this is a fact man, i will kill u like the duded chasin pac man
make u flap ya wings and fly away like batman
if u think ur gonna make a liven off rappin
u better guess again bitch cuz its not gona happen
all your lyrics do is cause laughin
the 1st time i herd your voice i cried tears
that same night i had nightmares
your voice cracks you got no rhythm or flow
bitch i will ripp ya shit up from head to toe
trust me boi u gotta go
girls play u but not the radio
man u suk at rappin ur a discrace
if u was to battle youd come in last place
ill spit cha ass out like toothpaste
i dont no why u try, i aint gona lie
ur lyrics murda people puttin em up in the sky
get outta the booth i dont no why your there
your songs are shitty like diareir
when people aks who you are i say i have no idea
im ghost motha fuka here me loud and clear
your family says your good just to get you off there back
but there standin in line beggin for my autograph
what chu talkin about bringin in the hoes and cash
man news flash!!
your shit reminds me of a baby rash
it spreads quick and every one wants it to go away forever
your lyrics get ripped up like a break up letter
and u best belive me, if u ever came out with a cd
it will get flicked like the channels on TV
your copys will stay in the stores on there mound
the only trip that theyll get is to the lost and found
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Postby Ethos » Dec 1st, '06, 06:04

and who wrote this?
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Postby stevethetruth » Dec 1st, '06, 13:20

Syanied wrote:and who wrote this?


some dude on myspace he wants to start beef with me for no reason sorry for not explaining i was in a hurry
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Postby Coccoa » Dec 1st, '06, 13:57

Gangsta, im stunting on a disco beat
You'se a fag, your rhymes should be on a Sisqo beat

2 bars only and i just smoked the dude.
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Postby Mr. Cookie » Dec 1st, '06, 13:59

Coccoa wrote:Gangsta, im stunting on a disco beat
You'se a fag, your rhymes should be on a Sisqo beat

2 bars only and i just smoked the dude.


haha lol....
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Postby Coccoa » Dec 1st, '06, 14:12

Wtf, 16 year old cracker from Rhode Island...nuffin.
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Postby stevethetruth » Dec 1st, '06, 14:31

yeah i responded saying wow that was wack lol
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Postby Infliction » Dec 1st, '06, 14:54

bahhhhhhhahhahahahahahaha that was pathetic, i hope you ripped him a new one man.
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Postby C-Game » Dec 1st, '06, 17:08

Coccoa wrote:Gangsta, im stunting on a disco beat
You'se a fag, your rhymes should be on a Sisqo beat

2 bars only and i just smoked the dude.


lol ha ha man

yo steve invite that mofo to TR and lets rip him apart
did u respond to his DISASTER PIECE
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Postby stevethetruth » Dec 1st, '06, 17:26

yeah i posted an accapela on myspace lol

only 56 secs long but completely crushes his lyrically lol
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Postby Coccoa » Dec 1st, '06, 17:29

Syndicate team, DRR. Bring him here so we can slice him off.
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Postby stevethetruth » Dec 1st, '06, 17:42

we should shouldn't we lol
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Postby Coccoa » Dec 1st, '06, 17:48

If i had my studio now......

I can still ghostwrite.
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Postby stevethetruth » Dec 1st, '06, 17:53

nah no ghost writing :laughing:

but damn i think that audio i made will just shut him the fuck up lol
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Postby Coccoa » Dec 1st, '06, 18:12

Ghostwriting is a hobby kid
So if a nigga's shit sounds like i wrote it, i prolly did
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